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Katherine


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Established Applejack/Fluttershy ("Appleshy") relationship. Set after The Return of Harmony. Themes: Remembering, consent, love.

Once more Fluttershy is on her back looking up at Applejack. But this time, the two of them are by themselves and they have none of Twilight's magic: only their own.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

Your writing style shows promise, but I think it could be a good idea to have more content before publishing, rather than putting up itty bitty fanfic bits like this.

Keep going, you've got great potential! :twilightsmile:

This was a nice story. I wish there was more, but I really enjoyed it, especially Fluttershy's reasoning as to why she asked Rainbow's permission to hold her down.

I'm a fan of flash fiction, and I have to say I love what you get across in these. :yay:

i may be wrong but in my opinion it coud have used a little more, something, but other than that it was wonderful:ajbemused:

It was short but sweet! I very much enjoyed the interaction between them.

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