When a changeling named Thunder Strike is ordered specifically by Queen Chrysalis to replace a certain Wall-eyed Pegasus, she thinks it's a dream come true to have that much love directed at her. But when she starts to return it, her life takes a turn for the worse, and only Twilight Sparkle can fix it. Too bad she hates Changelings. Based off of the results I got on a collection of about sixty MLP birthday games.
I feel stupid for expecting people to read this at this time of night, and when it's unpublished.
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I see.
4515536 I have a favorite?
Photo Face Seriously though, this is huge for me. And yes. Yes she is.
4515887 Tank the turtle.
4516950 Well, sometimes, I need to eat.
4517415 Nah. Just let Thunder rage handle it.
Thunder deserves afor the thing coming up in next chapter.
4517834 Bedtime for me. nuh-night.
4513595 lolz
nice. and yes very short
i hate clifhangers
This seems interesting, though I'll suggest making the chapters a bit more long.
4533884 Mad-Libs, man. Mad-Libs.
4537161 mad-libs ate so funny they make people confused
4536426 Next chapter will be longer.
4539244 Well, like my friend Ryan keeps telling me, I'm a weird little girl, but weird means different, and different is good. Therefore, the fact that I like Mad-Libs and you don't just makes me a tiny bit more unique.
4541435 u misunderstood me.
I love mad libs
I blame auto correct
Trollestia it's auto correct.
4541435 And that basically makes me 20% cooler.
4541552 Oh. I'm still weird.
Is anyone here?
I read to half of it and uhh no? I mean its way to random with no story building at all. I can't even say that characters are OOC because they have like 3 verses and thats it. uhh
4606791 I apologize if you don't like my story. My original ideas for most chapters made more sense, but they just didn't fit into the climax properly. It's my first fanfiction I've ever written, which may attribute to the fact that it isn't very good. Here, have an apology mustache.
Are you a Pinkie Pie? Your fiction is too random.
4820184 It's based off of birthday games. Off course it is. And yes, I'm a pinkie pie.
MEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Derpy, Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
"So yeah. I'm evil. Deal widdit"
I refuse to deal widdit!