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Divayth Fyr & Moonbutt: The Elder Scrolls Adventure

Luna is become Reman, Divayth Fyr visits Equestria, Vivec clashes his spear with Nightmare Moon, Mane Six have a drinking contest with Talos on Secunda and Pelin-el is the original brony. Stay tuned for more.

Divayth Fyr & Moonbutt: The Elder Scrolls Adventure is a deliberate attempt at exploiting complicated metaphysics of The Elder Scrolls to tell a convoluted, but hopefully not lorebreaking story set in The Elder Scrolls universe including Equestria.

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Tailgate

Tailgate #1 · Jun 3rd, 2014 · · ·

I would suggest using one line to seperate each line of dialogue and paragraphs to make it easier to read.
At the moment it feels really clunky reading it without space, I would suggest looking at one of my stories to see what I mean by using the one line spacing. Oh, and also indentation of each new paragraph.