Feelings and inner emotions are what define you and everyone else in the world. Emotions can tell someone whether you're happy or sad, nice or rude. Occasionally, those feelings can get the better of anyone in the world, spiraling our of control like a raging bull or driving you into a pit of despair. But, when it gets down to it, every human being is the same, and instinct to survive and a drive to prosper in any situation presented, living with what they have. For this, that is the time they show their true selves, their true colors. And when we show our true colors, it is what permanently defines us in the real world.
The same intro here will be the first paragraph in chapter one.
This is my first story I have made and i'm still getting the hang of using this website and actually writing down "good" stuff.
And as always, tips and hints, (grammar as well) for the story would be much appreciated, I still haven't figured out set dates for chapter releases, bear with me here.
I am really trying to not rush things in this story so please comment if it is and I will try to fix that problem.
Thanks :)
Why are there nine spaces at the beginning of your description?
Nice can't wait for more! :)
4480304 are you talking about the part in chapter 1?
I kinda feel like this is overdone (type of story) but I like they way you put it in a different P.O.V like a Russian soldier other than the usual a allies or U.S soldier P.O.V
I like your story and I hope you can continue to write better and better.
4481107 How are you confused?
This...... I shall read it later.
Sorry I could not resist.
4493769 Sweet Celestia!...
4493820 Come on you know this was bound to happen!
*Land in a open area of grass and trees*
"I SURVIV-"
*Tank land on him*
-The End.
I look forward to Griffons speaking Russian.
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Could be interesting if Twilight did some Xenobiology and Xenoarcheology on the tank and what is crushed beneath it.
This is interesting,can you make more