Hello everybody, this is my second fanfiction attempt, this will encompass a series of One-Shot shipfics.
The shipfics in this collection, will be between 2,000-6,000 words.
I hope you enjoy, all the diabetes induced, romance stories hope you enjoy the work. If you see any mistakes, such as spelling errors, misused words, or punctuation mistakes, please tell me in the comments, so I can correct them. Also leave any constructive criticism, in the comments as well. Hope you guys enjoy, all my hard work.
Teen Rating for possible, teen-rated themes later on.
Chapter 1: RariJack- "Coming To Terms"- Applejack has been feeling new emotions, for a certain snow white unicorn, she can't quite put her hoof on why. 2173 Words.
Chapter 2: AppleDash- "A Race For The Heart"- Applejack notices Rainbow Dash, acting strangely she can't quite understand why, but shes gonna find out, one way or another. 2214 Words.
Chapter 3: TwiDash- "Preening Is Loving"- Twilight Sparkle has recently rose up through the ranks since moving to Ponyville, she has now fulfilled her destiny and became the next Alicorn Princess of Equestria, Twilight is only having one little problem her new wings. Its a good thing one of your best friends is Rainbow Dash one of the best fliers in Equestria, but after the pegasus has an unfortunate accident Twilight's choice of how to help may change their relationship forever. 2256 Words.
A few grammer errors, but it's still a very cute story
Cute story, but horrible grammar.
4499868 Yeah I know sorry for the horrible grammar, my editor has been on vacation, for the past 2 weeks. He will be back before I upload chapter 3, hope you enjoy it soon, I may go back and fix the other chapters, but I doubt it. Thanks for the thoughts.
A good story. Bit of advice, though... you've got to stop using the commas so often. Also, you seem to be a tad confused with the usage of "you're" vs "your" in a few places. Remember, "you're" is shorthand for "you are", while "your" shows possession. One last thing, when you're punctuating your sentences or questions, remember the right mark. There were a few places in the story where you ended questions with periods, and it kind of drags the reader away from the story.
I know that it's because of your editor being away, please know that I mean no offense toward your writing skills, this is just some (hopefully) helpful advice. I can't wait to read some further stuff!
4587825 Yeah thanks for the advice, I would have gone back and corrected the mistakes earlier, but I've been to busy, plus these stories were written, almost 8 months ago I only just got around to posting them, I will try and correct them when I release the next story, which won't be for a few more weeks.
When will be the next chapter???
That was pretty good! Oh could you write a rarity and rainbowdash? That would be awesome
4658677 Thank you but this fic is currently on Hiatus, I will not be able to continue writing on it for at least a month but I will attempt a RariDash fic as soon as I start back writing.