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You beat me to it.
Best story ever, thank you. I added this to favourites, please continue in this awesome story
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As in the idea?
417657 Yes.
417757
Well I'm sorry
Like the story so far. Just one request, try to avoid shedding unnecesary blood. It is great Twilight gets a background but now there should be a lot of blood free chapters telling us how ponyville prepares for war and give us a rebel point of view and tellings us how they prepare for war, why they prepare for it and a bit of deeper story on the events. There are some grammar errors but the story is fast paced and intriguing.
Hope this bit of critique helps you
826843
Well the story isn't focusing much on the war itself, it's about events that happen around it. But I already have an outline made of how I want the story to go.
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Ok. As said the story starts off being quite interesting. But if you've read stories like" guilt and hate" they quickly develop into a neverending carnage which is really frustrating to read. Otherwise your story has many potential and I'd love to see all of it!
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it's not going to be like that, don't worry :D
I LOVE YOU DAN
FINALLY. I've been waiting like 200 years for this. I love you. But I hate you. Rawr ima potato
I hate you phxphxhpx. I hope you stub your toe really bad. And it hurts >:C
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I love the differences in the comments, since they're all you they're all lined up.
You better not have killed Rainbow Dash. And please update soon, I hate lingering on tragedies.
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I'm sorry, I'll try :P I'm also in college, run a pretty popular website, and pay attention to my youtube :S
Stop ending chapters like that >:C I NEED MOARR. IMA KILL YOU DANN
Can we get some happiness in here please? At least a little hope? All this grief is making a nauseous.
There will be a little bit of hope towards the beginning of next chapter...I promise. It may not be much but it's more than there has been :P 1632606
You love me. Sam 1457236
Damn. I really enjoyed how dark this was. Good Job. It was worth the wait.
Dan. I can kill you in like. A MILLION different ways if you hurt Rainbow Dash. I will slap your face, off of your face. >:C
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But my faces' face is beautiful...that would be a crime against fabulosity if it were to disappear.
It's on hold....
It's on hold!
*Giggles like a psyco*
IT'S ON HOLD WITH DASH BEING TORTURED!!!!
*Changes mood Pinkie Pie style*
Anyway great story, I must hear the rest. O_o
............ seventy or so years prior to the series current, there was a war.
after nightmare moon was banished, celestia bulked up her armed forces as likely aggressive factions saw that they were down one demigod.
this is not a first war.
also wouldn't they be using an element bearer as a bargaining chip? she would be far too valuable to keep locked up or detained.
Thank you for fast update! I wuv you <3
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1) I do not remember that happening whatsoever
2) They could, but I didn't want that to happen soooo...no. That's not what she's doing. Instead she made it seem like Rainbow died.
4225147 was brought up in the comics with the war, a time refrence using a poyn that helped her during that war being around as an old mare around Granny Smith's age.
in testing testing 123 they liuterally stated that celestia built up the army after luna was banished. while they did not say war or enemy threat, what other reason would she do that?
and speaking of which............... luna. luna would know whether or not rainbow dash is alive.
also saying you do not want it to is not a good reason for it to not happen. you are putting the narrative over the charactes, and that does not often lead to good results.
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This came out plenty before that episode and the comics and I'm not going to change it now, also i is perfectly fine to choose how I want to write my story as long as it is believable. You can not say for certain that Luna would be able to know, there's this fancy thing called MAGIC that can do a number of things to stop that.