How do I explain this? Luck? I dunno. After making a bogus birthday wish I end up totally lost and confused in Equestria. Not only do I have to try to understand how and why I got here, but I've also got a sinking feeling that something bad is going to happen.
Dunno about those who disliked this but I enjoyed this chapter.
Well written, no obvious mistakes, style of arrival is somewhat common but workable.
4354764 there are a few obvious ones. Capitalization.
4354764 thank you. I dunno who dislike either, but I can under stand their point of view.
4354805 I must have missed them then.
I like this chapter. Can't wait for more.