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The Future of Equestria

This is kinda my first attempt at a story-series thing. I hope it turns out well because it would be pretty cool to write a mini series which many people enjoy. I'll be writing the series chapter-by-chapter; I don't plan ahead much when it comes to writing, it's just not my style. Anywho, I hope you enjoy this mini series full of action and adventure and comedy and drama and... uh... ponies!

Chapters (3)

1 Twilight's New Spell · 3rd May 2014 · 431 words
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2 The Equestria of Tomorrow · 3rd May 2014 · 1,013 words
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3 Celestia The Mad · 28th May 2014 · 984 words
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Sea Salt

Sea Salt #1 · May 4th, 2014 · 1 · · 2 The Equestria of Tomorrow ·

While the premise of your story is quite interesting I have some questions and also you may want to change the first chapter.

1 Why did a potion to enhance abilities make a worm hole?
2 Why didn't Rainbow Dash drink the potion? Dash is both adventurous and stupid.
3 Maybe you should change the first chapter to have Twilight be doing time spells.
4 Are you going to explain why Twilight as an immortal alicorn isn't here in her older form?
5 These chapters don't feel planned out.

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