The Lone Knight

butterfield pancake

butterfield pancake #1 · May 6th, 2014 · · · C'est la vie ·

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You have my attention a French and British Knight Awesome

Synonym Toast Crunch

Synonym Toast Crunch #2 · May 6th, 2014 · 1 · · C'est la vie ·

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Buck! buck buck buckity bucking buck!

how someone gets the same idea is sorta common.

But when some gets the same idea for the story THEN the same title. it baffle me!

ahem*

sorry its just i was writing a knight who entes equestria as well(though a few stuff is different) and has the same title I have on the story is rather odd.

So! becuase of such astounishment, im gonna like, fav, and follow! congrats dear sir/madam you have best-ed me at speed and timing and deserve the title!

P.S. If you want,when i finish writing a few chapters I can tell you the name of the story. though the title will just be

A Lone Knight. instead of The lone knight.

anyway, i hope to see your story progress.

Indeed!

(though i small bit of me"wishes to aquainte your facial fetures with the fundalmental item used in building walls) damn I need a dictionary...

dukesofhazzardftw

dukesofhazzardftw #3 · May 6th, 2014 · 2 · · C'est la vie ·

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Hmm I'm intrigued. Tell me more.

Lasrian Kano

Lasrian Kano #4 · May 6th, 2014 · · · C'est la vie ·

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That's a wandering cursed knight in Dark souls 2 right?

The Rar

The Rar #5 · May 6th, 2014 · · · C'est la vie ·

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The brilliant silver armour.
Arrow in the eye.
Depressed look.

Yep, that's a Heide knight.

phallus of malice

phallus of malice #6 · May 6th, 2014 · 1 · · C'est la vie ·

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Try and be a little more formal with your speech patterns in this story. A Frenchman from that time would more than likely use the term 'In God's name!' Instead of saying what the hell, as Christianity was the dominant religion of the time period. Also, instead of using the word, pretty, in this kind of story you would most likely wanna go with, quite, to descibe anything with any sense of scale. Don't forget that with the knight's upbringing and the time period he would have at least some bigotry towards Ol' Frenchy.

Besides that, this was a little rushed and left a bit too much to the imagination.
On another note, you got something good started so keep it up, and if you need an editor, be sure to just ask around the site and I'm sure you could pick something up.

Jubilant Catarina

Jubilant Catarina #7 · May 7th, 2014 · · · C'est la vie ·

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Damn... Thank you all for the support and comments! I will edit up the story in a little bit because this chapter was sorta rushed. I am hoping to get a few more chapters in the coming weeks. Also, if anyone in here wants to be an editor for me, please PM me.