Nexius, a human ends up in equestria turns into a hero. Stays there for a while, relaxes, makes new friends. After a while he wants to go home to find out he can't.
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NeXus Ramos
Tell me what you think about my stories and ask me what to write for you guys. hope you like them and don't blame me if they suck. im new at this. but I got loads of ideas and some of them are awesome
NeXus Ramos
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Almost all of that was the beginning of the the game. If you have the game you can check it out for yourself. You'll see I'm right. I was playing it again to make this part of the story. But still no excuse for me to make it boring. Okay I will continue making crappy stories that you guys will hate. Mwa ha ha ha!!!!! >=D
I read the title of my own story and it actually "sounds" different than what I wrote.
To; Nonon Jakuzure
Thanks for your comments! I think its not that good (my story). I don't care about my grammar. And if it sucks why are you reading it? What person would read a lame story? Hint;you. I'm doing this cause I'm bored. Yeah I know, get a life. But if you hate it stop reading. I'm a nice guy. I don't want enemies. Peace on Equestria brother :)
Mate, if you were bored you'd look at improving your grammar and your writing style. Just vomiting out words does not give you a free pass to be mediocre.
Like 4337942 said, this is a bad idea that has very rarely succeeded. Scrap this story, get some more practice in, and come back with a better idea.
We are very critical here. If we don't see something worth reading early on, then no-one is gonna want to touch this. And if you don't want us to read it, then you really shouldn't have put it up in a public space for us to read it. This isn't about making enemies, this is about trying to help someone. Keep up that attitude, though, and you'll make no friends here.
Hey, I'm thinking of making another story about some angle was chased away from heaven and lands on Equestria where Fluttershy takes care of him? Not sure what you people will think about it.
And I meant to put angel. Damn autocorrect!!!