When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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Aaand here it is: She finally finds out how much she done fucked up.
Oh luna no... Oh HELL NO... I'm really hoping Celestia is NOT about to do what I think she's about to do.
And I sure as hell hope Jason ain't gonna go along with it.
: Goes exactly the opposite.
NO NOT ENOUGH, TWILIGHT NEEDS A PUNISHMENT! SHE DID NOTHING AND IT NEARLY RESULTED IN HIS DEATH
These cliffhangers need to stop, bro. You're too good of a writer to hinge your story on such a tried, infuriating trope.
Well fuck. Anyways, nice update, great to see this story again so soon. Keep up the good work, high speed low drag writing. Quick with quality.
Black
If Celestia yells at Jason, I'm gonna team up with Discord to turn her to stone.
My, my how the tables have turned.
Enjoy your trip to the sun, Jason.
FUCK YOU CELESTIA HIS ANGER IS JUSTIFIED!
Hmmmm.... hope tto see another update soon,because..... IM GETTING SICK OF CLIFFHANGERS!!! AHHHHHHH!
Sorry had to let that out.
And what, pray tell, is Celestia going to say here? What possible justification can she have in chastising Jason after what he's been put through?
He had every right to go off like that on Twilight. I probably would have done much worse, myself.
If he doesn't turn his angry words to Celestia despite her imposing-to-ponies stature, I'll be severely disappointed. I don't want him to be cowed by her, I want to see him call her a liar.
4320384 BUT THEN SHE WOULDN'T HAVE GONE BACK AND WE WOULD'VE MISSED THE MOST EMOTION THIS FUCKER'S EXPRESSED SINCE THE ORIGINAL ENDING!
Oh shit Jason, no one goes yelling at twilight while celestia is around....
Shut up Celestia! His fucking Wright bitch! So stop intruding!
EDIT: First post!
I agree with most of the comments.
This story is bass-ackwards.
Jason expresses agony and pain for being rejected FOR THREE YEARS
I wonder if AJ truly shows remorse.
It's understandable for him not to forgive Twilight, but Celestia intervening when he expresses rage....
It doesn't sit right. Certainly a raised eyebrow moment.
GW none the less.
4320410
Nope.
Oh no, Celestia does not get to yell at Jason for raising his voice to Twilight. With what he went through, he deserves a chance to vent on the ponies that caused him pain, and so much more than that.
4320410
Not even close to first.
Jason deserves to vent. Three fucking years man. Not many people can withstand that kind of punishment for that long without breaking.
Watcha gonna say celly? Huh? Huh?! You don't think it's justified?! Unless it's Luna or something he can say whatever the duck he wants!
4320401 Hah, I want to see her stop him. Especially since he's more than in the right to do so. What's she gonna do, eh?
4320410 Okay, here we go.
1: I see what you did there.
2: Lol too late.
This really went a direction I didn't anticipate. Twilight isn't yelled at by Celestia for being a cunt; she's understood and comforted by her. Jason, however, actually expresses completely justified rage at Twilight and that's what Celestia has a problem with. Shit's backwards, yo.
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I know man. It was only me when I read it. Do these people actually read or just make up a comment and then read? Will I ever be first? One of the world's greatest mysteries.
4320439
That depends..does he like bananas?
"JASON WRIGHT!...
...no swearing allowed. Now carry on."
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Will you ever be first? Probably not with a popular story. It's kind of like with Korean gamers: There is always someone before you because they dedicate way more time to something than you do.
Oh no no celestia speech he don't deserve that twilight is the one who deserve it.Man 3years 3fucking years of punishment without reason
4320452 Then again, Celestia doesn't know anywhere near the full story, so I can understand her siding with what she knows.
Doesn't mean I like it.
Bitch if you fuckin' DARE to yell at him over ANYTHING right now...
4320462 *gets described as a popular story*
*squeeing intensifies*
4320472
You passed "popular" at, like, fifty upvotes, bro.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but Twilight only saw him once, right? o_0
What mane 6 did:
AJ: Kick him off barn, beat him when he gets near, refuse to hire
Pinkie: Avoid him, probably told the Cakes not to hire
Twilight: Slam door in face, "tired of humans" (FIRST DAY. JUST ONE DAY -out of 3 years.)
RD: Lightning cloud zap/beat him
Rarity: I forget. Probably called him a ruffian and shrieked. Eh.
Fluttershy: I also forget.
I'm not sure whether Jason should be blowing up at Twilight. Sure, he's absolutely justified to blow up..but it's toward the wrong pony (unless she knew how much her friends were tormenting him). And after all that mistreatment, shouldn't he have tried to walk back to Canterlot? Or contact Celestia? At first, I thought the ponies just had an irrational hatred toward humans (since the princesses only gave a day's worth stipend..and never gave a way to contact them...)...but now, I don't know why he stayed near Ponyville for so long if it was that awful. Instead, he kept digging through trash and living in the cave.
I still liked this chapter -just a tad bit confused. :P
4320461 I should actually write that just to fuck with all of you.
Twilight and her friends almost killed him. Her punishment must be more severe!
I wish I could favorite this story more than once. Don't stop writing!
Damn, only five minute after it went up, there are comments galore.
and you say this story isn't popular.
4320487 BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!!
4320400 TRUE BUT SHE DESERVES SOME PUNISHMENT
4320479 True he's pointing his rage at the wrong pony, but then again when has a person been rational when they've had 3-4 years of crap built up.
The worst thing about this though is that the ponies don't have to hate him, but the long list of indifference can be just as bad as out right hate.
For why he stayed near Ponyvile, I'd tie that up with stupid pride and a bit of fear of traveling outside the realm of the familiar. Or it could be that in his mind, if the residents of the town he had grown to love feared or hated him then what why would it be different anywhere else. But that's just my thoughts and maybe I'm taking this to seriously.
Celestia: JASON WRIGHT....your a human, she's a pony; thus I'll side with her due to the fact that she is a pony, since my little ponies are always right.
*If that happens*
Me: WHAT THE F***?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
4320479 True, but we have established he isn't forgiving any of them, and Applejack is trying to help, so we can temporarily be nice to her . Twilight was also the first one to slam a door in his face (figuratively and literally). So even if his hate is not perhaps as justified towards her when compared to the others, he would probably just release all his pent up hate for them all just on her.
4320540 I believe you are looking for this juracid.co.uk/gallery/forum/nuc-u-fffuuu2.jpg
Shit => fan => bad
The Unfairness has been doubled!
4320540 i tend to see that a lot here lately that just because they are ponies there automatically right and innocent of everything bad that ever happens and quite frankly it pisses me off i hope he tears into her too something along the lines of you preach love and tolerance but dont seem to practice it very much
What Jason needs to do is raise his pimp hand of justice and slap some hoes.
4320602 Yeah exactly. The ponies of ponyville are very xenophobic, and hatefilled towards anything that isnt a pony. They should really change their slogan to: Welcome to Ponyville!! All ponies welcome!! Everything else; DROP DEAD!!
4320485 i think you should do it that would be funny