A sequel to my previous OctaScratch fic, taking place in the nearly-immediate future. As usual, Vinyl and Octavia encounter more problems than they probably deserve.
Preparations halt when Princess Celestia forbids the playing of the Equestrian national anthem at a concert after a copy of its original is discovered to still exist. Despite her warnings, Octavia Melody endeavors to uncover the truth.
Fine Crime and Princess Luna have chosen their team. Now there's just the minor problem of bringing them together. Every team needs a base of operations, and what place better than Ponyville?
this has potential, im interested to see where it goes. However I hope you have a good reason for Dash to have just up and left, that doesn't strike me as loyal at all.
You need to finish this, this could be a great fanfic. Message me when a need chapter comes out. ( when it transitioned to the valley part add a extra space below, just because I thought it wasn't a transition until a bit more reading )
You better finish it, because this thing can go places, also the ending right now is lackluster
this has potential, im interested to see where it goes. However I hope you have a good reason for Dash to have just up and left, that doesn't strike me as loyal at all.
You need to finish this, this could be a great fanfic. Message me when a need chapter comes out. ( when it transitioned to the valley part add a extra space below, just because I thought it wasn't a transition until a bit more reading )