A story I'm writing with my sister (Arts Desire) based off of her original storyline. We used our own OCs and a few new ones to really make the story our own. We decided that different chapters would be narrated by different characters. The story is about a family of pegasi that get trapped in the Crystal Empire when it dissapears.
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This is a very enjoyable story so far
Keep up the good work!
Thanks. We are having some trouble finding the best way to do chapter 5 though. Which has halted my progress with chapter 6. So it maybe be a little longer beore we post the next update, but we are working on it. We just haven't started writting it yet.
Your abilities to expand are improving, however they need drastic improvement to meet the standard good fimfic. In any case, this is a decent story, the characters are developing at a steady pace and it's imaginative. I suppose this could be better when It didn't jump scenarios so fast, it'd be easier for fast readers to understand.