Fantastic chapter. Well written fight as well. Seems the Rider believes fear is your most useful ally, and he isn't wrong. Curious to see what happens now with the CMC and the Rider. Have a stache
Another excellent chapter, it would be cool if Perfect became second rider... but she's a pony so she can't ride... maybe she could be a Hell Puller? Cause she can pull the Hell Cart...
… Say what you want, guys. He's still better than the Nick Cage version in my book. Not perfect, but I don't expect him to be. Nice choice of music, though. I like it. A lot.
I wonder where that severed link will go and who'll find it.
“Son, you should know by now, the universe always provides,” said Pa Peach. As he said that a cold, clammy hoof ran itself down Tea Service's spine and a little filly started giggling in the darkness.
4328503 Shh, don't point out the shameless plugs for stories that I like. 4328804 I was actually going for "oh God they're gonna skin her alive." 4328368 Maybe I will keep her around, though that's not the plan right now 4328817 don't worry, I wont except as a one off gag if I have time.
4328954 I am no pro when it comes to Ghost Rider, but if he grabed crossbow, i think that it would transform or something, or meaby it would just burn/melt. Or if you mean a rifle i have no idea, meaby the bullets would just expload or something I DONT KNOW I NEVER READ COMIC'S!
All at once I was confronted with a glimpse of others, men and women, all in the same boat as me. A man turned unicorn with a golden, fiery aura. A living mountain of mutated flesh starring down abominations. An armored warrior that I swear was looking back at me. A king with a holy sword and blood on her hands, but not of her own doing.
This is the second story I've read on the same day that not only references other similar fanfics (the other fanfic I read even made a reference to this one) but also has a scene where the "hero" performs a ritual that seems to allow someone to summon them for some unknown purpose at a non-specified time.
4358202 Maybe it is, maybe it isn't. For all you know I could be setting up people who already want to do a crossover with this story or just plugging stories I enjoy. Only time will reveal the truth.
4403167 Define painful, was it the accent which doesn't exist to me as I hear it everyday or I just did a bad job writing her? Plus, he wasn't paying attention for the whole conversation, just bits and pieces interupting his thoughts.
4415687 Hey Dude Plz Use Ghost Riders Send you to hell ability Where he chokes you with the chain swings it up and slams it into the ground sending them to HELL.
I only want two, no, THREE things to come from this: 1) Scraping at the door! 2) Bee's. 3) Bear Jokes. If you can figure out how these three things an come together, I'll do something for you. Online. I'm not traveling overseas.
NOOOOO!!!! THE CMC!!!
Seems the Rider is up for recruit. Hope that doesn't mess with anything too bad, it can be inconvenient sometimes.
4328221 NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!
those guys are royally screwed...
Good
'nother great chapter!
Perfect seems like an interesting character, can't wait to see more of what we'll get out of her.
Ah, Blessed War Hammer. Explains things from the last chapter.
Am I right to assume that you're talking about my Jessica?
4328221 YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
Here's a question: what would the ghost rider as a pony? Would he look like the horse from the movie (the original riders horse)?
Fantastic chapter. Well written fight as well. Seems the Rider believes fear is your most useful ally, and he isn't wrong. Curious to see what happens now with the CMC and the Rider. Have a stache
Tea Service + Pa Peach =
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Another excellent chapter, it would be cool if Perfect became second rider... but she's a pony so she can't ride... maybe she could be a Hell Puller? Cause she can pull the Hell Cart...
no please dont make the rider a pony i like ponies but i like the ghost rider better as a human er human skeleton
… Say what you want, guys. He's still better than the Nick Cage version in my book. Not perfect, but I don't expect him to be. Nice choice of music, though. I like it. A lot.
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Can Ghost Rider use guns?
This Ghost Rider is second best Rider.
I wonder where that severed link will go and who'll find it.
She's the parchment.
nice chapter i loved the fight scene
4328503 Shh, don't point out the shameless plugs for stories that I like.
4328804 I was actually going for "oh God they're gonna skin her alive."
4328368 Maybe I will keep her around, though that's not the plan right now
4328817 don't worry, I wont except as a one off gag if I have time.
4328954
4328954 I am no pro when it comes to Ghost Rider, but if he grabed crossbow, i think that it would transform or something, or meaby it would just burn/melt.
Or if you mean a rifle i have no idea, meaby the bullets would just expload or something I DONT KNOW I NEVER READ COMIC'S!
4328954 did you not see the end of the first film?
4329128 I have NOT seen anything involving Ghost Rider.
Quite simply, i am not a comic book or comic book movie fan.
My apologies, but i still enjoy this fanfiction.
4328954 yes he can, but the chains can't turn into them. Sorry I couldn't say that in my last comment but my phone is shit.
Wonderful job building suspense and retaining my full interest.
Kinda curious how the CMC will react to the Rider showing up and if they recognize him. (kinda hard to forget actually)
4329143 in that case then yes, he can use firearms, they turn into hellfire guns with the ability to kill demons, anything he uses becomes awsome, he is the only character to make using an excavator look cool:
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Excavator scene, dat laugh
Wait..former Elements of Harmony, the hell happ- oh nevermind forgot about Season 4 Ep. 1, that and I wonder how the CMC and the Mane Six will react to THE Ghostrider
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4329006 Number 1 belongs to Alexander the great from fate/zero.
Huh, never expected him to pick up someone to ride in the side car, so to speak.
These are the only two that I'm not sure about.
Anyway, another good chapter.
4329748
Better go read that.
actually, best Rider is insane Rider.
Dark deeds are ahoof! But the rider is ever vigilant and all the dark forces shall fall beneath his penance stare.
Seems like Blackheart managed to make his way there or in the least someone who dressed as him and was teleported there like Ghost Rider.
4339429 What makes you say that?
4329157 Couldn't he just 'eat' metal or rocks and have a short range flamethrower?
Hell yeah, I'm lovin' this! Ghost Rider is my favorite superhero and it's high time vengeance came to Equestria!
You deserve a medal for writing this.
This is the second story I've read on the same day that not only references other similar fanfics (the other fanfic I read even made a reference to this one) but also has a scene where the "hero" performs a ritual that seems to allow someone to summon them for some unknown purpose at a non-specified time.
Is something going on here?
4358202 Maybe it is, maybe it isn't. For all you know I could be setting up people who already want to do a crossover with this story or just plugging stories I enjoy. Only time will reveal the truth.
Well. Cannibal hillponies. You have my interest, sirrah!
4# Ooooo
4403167 Define painful, was it the accent which doesn't exist to me as I hear it everyday or I just did a bad job writing her? Plus, he wasn't paying attention for the whole conversation, just bits and pieces interupting his thoughts.
Now the hammer of vengeance shall strike the scum known as the PEACHES!
so why exactly did you choose Peaches??? they are my favorite fruit... couldnt you have used Pears??? everypony knows that pears are EVIL
4415687 Hey Dude Plz Use Ghost Riders Send you to hell ability Where he chokes you with the chain swings it up and slams it into the ground sending them to HELL.
4974998 I shall remain neutral for my favorite fruit is watermelon!!
4371153 what, and where, is your profile pic from?
Damnit! Cannibls! I just know it! Fucking! Third time this week I had to deal with them!
I only want two, no, THREE things to come from this:
1) Scraping at the door!
2) Bee's.
3) Bear Jokes.
If you can figure out how these three things an come together, I'll do something for you. Online. I'm not traveling overseas.
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What the hell is a space marine doing with cannibals? Makes you wonder hmm.
5996472 you clever little shit
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As a neutral party, I just want to declare that I have no strong feelings one way or the other about this issue.
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5996472 The God damn wicker man!