Princess Celestia realizes that her time is nearing its' end. So her and Luna decided on Twilight Sparkle and Rarity as a replacement. Twilight and Rarity both want to know what they are getting themselves into, and as such Celestia and Luna must delve into their deep past to explain what will happen.
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this is going to end in tears. i hate tears. tracked
Indeed, I foresee much sadness.
380895 379362 im not a fan of sad stories but i have a hard time writing happy ones. I am attempting to make this a happy one.
Amazing is the only word to describe it
i am the first give me MUFFINS!!!
That... didn't reveal much. But that's fine- I'm still intrigued. I can see Pinkie Pie being distressed about the whole "immortality" thing.
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NO.
Okay, fine, have a muffin.
>>aloysis
thx for the muffin
Meh. Not my cup of tea.
Lina closed the door behind Rarity after nodding to Twilight.
Er... Dragon Slave!
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sorry, spelling fail. i wrote this whole thing on my phone, because, well what else am i supposed to do in classes?
it was supposed to be Luna. thank you for noticing
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tea? who said anything about tea?
if you are getting tea ill take an earl grey
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make that 2 earl grays and a packet of jaffa cakes
i am writing a story on one of the schools computers i made it really cloppy and put it a the thing that opens when u open microsoft word lol
416726 you mean a template? or the default document?
that's mean good sir, I do not approve.
but alternatively
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default documant and the 60 year old head teacher read it aswell after tht we had a sex ed assembly
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u really should put a few more chapters out
or rainbow dash will kick your arse
421479
u really should put a few more chapters out
or rainbow dash will kick your arse
and it was a default document dont ask how i wont tell u it a hackers secret
436914 um... Thank you? I think.
Oh my I enjoy where this is going. Though I feel as if something bad is going to happen to the Hero of the story. A sad tale indeed.
Don't you think I should turn just a few ponies to stone, I mean it is only fair...No No, this is your tale, though I can only image the ending will not be how it truly should. Everypony knows that Equestria is my land and always will be...Regardless I guess the only thing I have to look forward to is the madness of Pinkie Pie after I am defeated.
Very, very good. Sure there are a few grammatical errors, but with a story written this well those can be ignored. Although it is technically not a Rarity fic yet, I see no reason to remove it from the group. I hope you get many more well deserved watchers.
Cheers, BronyAlex (Admin of Rarity group)
467591 good point, rarity is technicly not a part of the story proper. I probably should remove the rarity and twilight tag.
Sorry about no uploads, this is the chapter 4, i have a few chapters finished after this, but im still proofing and adding stuff.
I'm slowly making my way through the stuff.