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Shysoldier94


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Took me a second to see Apple.mov behind her.

Cool Brony.
Would be even cooler if the chapters were longer though :rainbowkiss:

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Next chapter are going to be much longer.:pinkiehappy: This one was kind of an introduction so it didn't have that much in it.:pinkiegasp:

Interesting....
Continue.
But seriously, Imma gonna follow this story to the end.:scootangel:

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This is my first try at the horror genre so I hope everyone enjoys it :twilightsmile:

Oh god lol, Jappleack behind Dashie in the pic.

if this turns out to be sad i dont think my heart could take it just got back from reading the really sad dashie story :ajsleepy: but ill keep reading till the end but ill be reading the future comments on it for spoilers though:raritywink:

The newest chapter:yay:
I swear that while I was writing this last night, I could hear noises and voices outside my room and everyone was asleep:twilightoops::rainbowderp:
Anyways this chapter's much longer and hope y'all enjoy! :twilightsmile:

That was creepy.

I'm not much into the whole 'paranormal investigation' stuff, but you write a great story. I await the next addition.:scootangel:

Very well done, Now I have to wonder, did/do you ever watch these types of shows, such as Ghost Hunters with TAPS or some other show, or have you actually experienced anything like this. It's always interesting to hear where people get their source of inspiration.
Also, Applejack!:fluttercry:

NOOOOOO! If you are going to end it like that you have to promise me the next one is coming out soon!!!!! :rainbowdetermined2: NOOOOO APPLEJACK!!! :ajsleepy:

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Yes I've watched Ghost Hunters, Ghost Adventures and a few other shows similar to these. Some of there methods I've interpreted in here such as Zak Bagans' (of Ghost Adventures) method of intimidating spirits to make them interact like Rainbow Dash did in the second chapter. And I also have experienced spiritual activity in my house. A long time ago my family and I experienced demonic entities in our old farm house. That was a long time ago but now in a different house, we experience what we think is residual hauntings. So all in all I tried to take what I experienced and stuff I've seen and put that together to make this story as realistic as possible.

384208 Ah, I see. I do have to say that Zak's tactic does fit RD's personality quite well, however that can be quite dangerous; it's kind of like playing Russian Roulette where the gun only has two chambers and the only one playing is you. Also, you may want to make sure that it is residual haunting and not a new haunting all together [Unless you didn't move that far away from your old place]. I've actually had my own dealings with demonic hauntings, unfortunately my current house has one, and I myself am being targeted by a demon. Not sure why it picked me, but it's very interesting listening to two demons argue, you can't understand what they say, but each word sends a...Its hard to explain what it feels like... It feels like a blue-grey going through the body, so cold and lonely and dark. Well, if you need any help with proof-reading I'd be more than glad to help [not obvious ploy to get chapters earlier] or if you'd like more references for your story you can just ask.

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Yes I agree 100% that it can be dangerous because you never know what you're dealing with. And we were sure that there were demons at that old farm house. Come to find out that the previous owners were satanic worshipers and performed satanic rituals. It's torn down now and we've moved quite far distance from it.
I sure do hope that everything works out for you, friend. And I'll keep that in mind about proof-reading I'll be sure to let you know :twilightsmile:
Stay safe,
-Rainbowdash218

my vary first ghost story about mlp and i dident need to sleep anyway:fluttercry:

*whimper*:fluttershyouch::fluttershbad: Dude, seriously creepy stuff man. Like, Cupcakes is a walk in the park compared to this, for me anyway. Keep it up.:scootangel:

In the end it is just Princess Celestia "April Fools!" :trollestia:

And here it is, the end of Ponyville Paranormal Society. It's been a longer ride than expected but I'd like to thank you all to read and followed the story all the way through even though it took me awhile. Please review and rate because seriously, I get almost no reviews on my stories. It's the reviews that help me keep going. If you take the time to do so, awesome! Thanks a lot! :yay:

If any of you are curious, check out my other stories on my page. Thanks so much guys and gals! :ajsmug:

~Rainbowsoldier94

Was it a dream? Or was it real? A premonition?
WHO KNOWS?

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Yes it was a dream. Rainbow sure can have messed up dreams :rainbowderp:

:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage: NOOOO!!!!!! I REFUSE TO BELEIVE THIS!!!! Oops, sorry. I don't know what came over me. Umm... I hope it gets better.

You, sir, have accomplished what even "Cupcakes" failed to bring me; genuine terror. I was horrified. You have talent, real, terrifying, talent. Good job.:scootangel:

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Thank you for the compliments! :twilightsmile:

This was my first attempt at a horror fic. I might be doing something similar like this in the future but no ideas have come to mind yet.:ajsleepy:

The ending reminded me a little of Final Destination, what with her dreaming about dying and waking up before it all happened. Very good!!!! Had to skip this concluding this, because it was 1 in the morning and I would have been terrified.... but it turns out paranoia got the better of me....

dang it i was going to go to the bathroom now i gotta hold it in for the night :raritydespair:

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