Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, and Ditzy Doo investigate into a matter only they have a recollection of and discover much more than they desired.
First story I've ever written, forgive me, ha ha. I have no idea where I'm going with this, so I expect to be criticized harshly.
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Hmm... I rushed thorugh it. AND CELSTIA! This is your first? Way better than mine! You're a spelling and grammer whizz! I won't follow it because I have lots but it's really good!
Pretty good and very original. It seems like it might be in danger of going a bit too fast, but for now it's looking bright.
Hope you continue it!!
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Thank ya kindly for ya praise. I appreciate it, ha ha.
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You're right. It seems to be going too fast. I'll try to slow it down like a sloth! Thank you for your comment!
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My advice was taken..... Well, this is a first for me. I must use a Pinkie Pie to celebrate!
Anyyyway, no problem. Sloths are cute and adorable and cuddly. Sloths will officially make your story 20% cooler