A pony working in the field of discovering humanity's past is about to get more than she bargained for. Will she be able to handle the journey that will descend upon her?
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Long Live Derping
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Well....
There are a few grammar errors here and there, but nothing too major.
My only real complaint is the writing style. It's almost good, but not quite. Read it aloud and see if it all sounds right to you. There's just something wrong with it, I dunno.
Aside from that, you've got my interest. Let's see how this turns out.
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Ah, yes, thank you very much for your feedback. I will try to improve on this strange writing style! I'm also glad that I hold your interest. I hope to hear from you when the next chapter is released!
Holy bit! They discovered warehouse 13! EVERYPONY RUUUUN!
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Go on...
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We shall denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/rsz/mlfw6260_small.png .
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Well, thank ya kindly, Mister John. Here's to hoping I live up to your expectations
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I am waiting...
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I don't know how you modern writers say it, but I think this is called 'stalling'. Still don't have a clear concept of what's going to be in there. But don't worry! I'll think of something soon!
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Ha ha, sorry to disappoint, mate. Don't worry though, they'll be going through it next chapter!
Huh? What an odd coincidence that is! Well, I just got most of these name from a name generator for ponies, so I guess I can see why that was bound to happen.
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To be honest, I have no idea what I just wrote either.
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I'm glad to see you're still staying to read this for what its worth and I thank you.