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The Royal Equestrian Weather Service's Special Meteorology Bureau has a task for Rainbow Dash, but can she handle it?

Before the events of Hurricane Fluttershy, the Bureau sends one of its own, a Storm Chaser, to help and advise. But before you can lift a lakeful of water with a tornado, you need to fill the lake first...

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Sounds awesome. Will definitely read it later. :moustache:

OMG, this is legit! I didnt finish reading it but I'll read it later.

YUS! A smartDash fanfic! nice so far, will definately fave and thumbs up!:rainbowkiss:

Thanks for the responses, glad you're enjoying it so far. You can expect Chapter 2 in the next day or so.

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I wasn't aware smartDash was a thing... :rainbowderp:

I was aiming for more ProfessionalDash here - I figure that, as boastful, arrogant and occasionally aggressive that Dash can be, she's the weather team captain - she has to put her head down and do the work at some point.

Yeeeooowchhhhh!!!!!!! Poor Derpy!! :pinkiegasp::fluttershysad::raritycry:.......And to think that she was the one still airborne after the first attempt with the tornado tanked. She's made of iron or something.

Maybe Twilight should have noted that she heard cracks or pops every time there was a lightning strike.

Ha, nice job of ending it with the old video clip they showed in hurricane fluttershy. :rainbowdetermined2::fluttershyouch:

Very nice. I love it when stories work around the episodes of the show instead of ignoring them, or just having all their events take place afterwords. It's something I have/am trying to do in my own writing. This was a nice little story :twilightsmile: I was kind of hoping for a longer more involved plot with Derpy, but what you did was satisfactory.

The part about Thunderlane in the bathroom reminded me of the move The naked Gun and I laughed out loud at that part.

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