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If was a good chapter, I'm just anxious for him to meet up with the natives. That glare AJ gave him is more than a little disheartening though.
a good chapter. kind of short, but I thoroughly enjoyed it.
I really love this story a lot, and I hope that the next chapter comes out soon.
I really like how you are setting this up, and I cant wait!
Who or what was the scream I wonder?
will our dear protagonist walk into them or rather what is left of them?
Will they walk/run into him?
Tune in next time on Dragon bal-uhh I mean on
A Life I Lived
Confusing.
6922868 What would be confusing my dear eraser? I would be happy to answer any questions you have as long as they don't reveal the future of the story.
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6924063 Nothing in particular, but I had to read the chapter twice to make sense of it. I had no such problem with the previous ones.
6924332 I did try to write it as cryptic as possible so there's that.
oh shit is we going to find a dead or dying pony in the morning. oh my god I can hardly wait but I must love the story by the why.
Well the next chapter's going to be over 2,000 words, maybe 3,000, and may be coming out sooner than expected.
next chapter
7005847 Oh, it's coming... tomorrow... hopefully.
Well I can see yet ANOTHER 'Human treated like shit by Ponies' story. Downvoted.
7012748 Thank you for your comment.
7012766 Do not take it as an insult to you as an author, but I cannot bear to see the characters I love be total and complete jerks to some poor shmuck for pretty much no reason. Thank you for being so understanding. Do you have any other works that I might read?
7012776 Trust me when I say this, they're not going to treat him like trash. And you would understand if you would stay with this story and continue to read it. And I do understand your hate of those types of stories, they're usually bad. And another type of story I would recommend you read would be A Taste of the Good Life, that's if you're looking for a bit of a heart touching story. If you are looking for an HiE fic though, I would recommend Welcome The Unknown . It's a bit of a drag at the beginning, but if you do tough it out, it does become a little bit of an interesting story.
And before you leave this story to be forgotten in your browser history, I must ask that you do one thing.
Imagine, if you will, a drop of water in a pond. Sure it leaves a small ripple in the beginning, but after a few seconds you can see it take travel over the surface of the lake. And further after that, it will cause even more ripples in its surface causing even more ripples. Until the lake changes or adapts.
It's a bit of a metaphor of this story.
7012823 Your statement intrigues me. Alright, I'll bite. I'll read this. In turn I offer for you to read my own work. I won't mention the title here so as not to detract from your own work. Just be sure to read the disclaimer if you do.
7014875 Thanks, I'm surprised I didn't catch these things.
7014998 If my experience in school has taught me anything, there is an abundant of kids carrying a blade of some sort. I would know.
And I really should reword that.
7015109 The reason she couldn't will be explained further in the future, and what do you think Diamond Tiara told Twilight?
Typo in the first sentence, that does not bode well.
Oh for the love of Pete, it's 'foreboding'.
Dusk, DUSK!
Naught.
This is making me mad. The man uses almost no logic at all and the Ponies are complete asses. I think I'm done.
7015177 dude, just chill, for god's fucking sakes!
7052541 Excuse me? Why should I just 'chill'? Should I ignore the blatantly obvious signs that there was little to no effort put into editing this? Do you hate American English so much that you're willing to see it butchered in such a manner? Do you then propose that I do the same? That I ignore spelling and grammatical errors which would be easy to fix?
7053234 because it's just a story, not the US Constitution.
7053234 Well, unlike you, I don't have time to edit every single sentence and word that is in some way shape or form broken. I have a life, and I find it more prevalent than writing a FanFiction. And a piece of advice when trying to make a rebuttal, actually use what they said against them.
Because he didn't say anything along the lines of purposing that you do the same thing as I do.
You can attack me and my Fic all you want, but I won't let you do it to any of my readers in the comment section.
7054677 Just as a heads-up, you can block anybody from reading your material with the block button. I had to do so with one jerk who was lying through his teeth and being an ass... kind of like me (the being an ass part, not the lying). *sigh* Look, I just want you to take some pride in your writing. Take a few minutes and fix a few problems then update once a week or something and you'll have a good story. I get worked up easily, but that's no excuse for me going off. It just burns me to see a fellow author leaving things like that in what would otherwise be an alright story, or at least a story with the potential of solid character development. I apologize for being fussy. I do like the story but the errors just... bug me so bad.
I know how tricky it can be to edit everything properly. I tell my own readers to let me know in the comment section when they spot typos so I can fix them while it's still on my mind. Even after 700,000 words, I STILL have readers finding typos in chapters and it just drives me crazy. So, I know the frustration. Don't give up, this has potential bro. Peace.
7054713 I understand that the errors are there and can be annoying, but I really don't have the time to sit down and edit. I have essays to write, books to buy, classes to go to, and assignments to turn in. And while I really would love to erase every single error I write down in this story, I don't have the time to do so.
A really big reason as to why I need an editor.
I accept your apology and I do accept the fact that I can do better. But as it stands to reason, I don't have the time.
~Zyks
7055238 That is a very reasonable answer, good sir. I will leave it alone then.
Really like this story so far, I especially like how you have some realism in that he can't accept the fact that there are other talking species other than humans.
7080190 Psychologically speaking, it's nearly impossible. If you've grown up 'normally', you'll only be exposed to talking humans, nothing else, and that can cause a few problems if you're dropped in the middle of nowhere with talking ponies. You'll begin to go through the five stages of grief. Denial, anger, bargaining, depression, and finally acceptance. The reason why is because meeting a talking horse would more than likely destroy every single beleif you hold onto.
In a sense, your mind would have to 're-wire' itself in order to compensate this influx of knowledge. Needless to say, it can be extremely taxing on the human mind. This can be seen with the main protagonist. He grew up in a world filled with talking humans, and one day is dropped into a world of talking ponies. If MLP:FIM didn't exist, I'm certain that anybody would more than likely freak out about meeting talking ponies, instead of being so happy about it. Even if they were to meet on better terms.
-The Invisible Man
P.S. Thank you for the other comment.
*Snap* Nice, achievement get.