Ponyville has never been a stranger to interesting events. But, when an unknown species, a human, shows up out of nowhere early one evening, things begin to take an unusual turn. Is his appearance just a coincidence, or is there more to him than anypony realizes?
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I think you maybe the first person ever to write Pinkie being afraid of a human arriving in EQ. As far as fandom goes it's almost out of character for her to act that way. Ignoring that bit I still like the story so far I'll keep it tracked for the time being.
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Well it DID just crash into her house
It would scare me
835546 Anthropology. She's terrified of humanity's carnivorous tendencies in it.
A Chariot.
and then princess molestia raped them to death the end :D
Hah! Oh no, there's going to be more than just this. Little subtle things will be made clear at the end, whenever that comes. I will admit that in the storyboard, there's something particularly...hmm...insane? I dunno if that's the right word, but hell, we're writing fics about talking, magical ponies. We're already past that!
Grr... Cliffhangers.
When you see it... you'll shit bricks.
Chapter 2 has been cleaned up a bit and your faces should no longer be flattened by walls of text!
Great job on this story so far it is probably one of the only HiEs that I actually like. I am interested in where the story is going and it leaves me wanting more. Once again great job.
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Nice chapter
good story so far I am interested in where the story is heading.
Compared to most HiE fic's. This isn't bad
Keep up the good work bro
Eeyup.
BIRST! (Seeing as first dont alowed.)
great chapter keep em coming!!!!!!! love this story by the way one of my favorites.
884989 You said first, as well.
I know I have said that this story is really damn good in all but seriously this is my favorite HiE fic I have read. Just the way the characters are playing their roles is really interesting and the way you keep the story flowing is really great. I hope there is still a lot more to come thanks for the great fic!
lol if its the dragon make him go dovakiin on his ass :D
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Thanks man, feels good to hear that I'm apparently doing an OK job on my first fic I AM going to be a little worried about reactions in a couple chapters, but I suppose as long as it's written decently, it should be OK. Compared to some of the stuff I've seen it can't be worse
Angry mob?
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Not even close. No spoilers from me!
im guessing matt has heartburn,
so i guess he will have toponibooru.413chan.net/_images/c9f01cb69969c794cf13e95ae0671bf9/918%20-%20celestia%20macro%20madmax%20meme%20sunglasses.jpg
This is an interesting chapter I like how you bring back creatures from the show.
that ersa is gonaa get a as whipin as if it were in jail with a bunch of men big men and the ersa was a wee little thing
i love it when a plan comes together
Well, I wonder what that light was, hm?
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Eeyup.
I don't remember him getting any pep-talks from his grandma before, so this one seems a bit incongruous.
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Not so much a pep talk. Granny Smith told him he had to figure out what was important to him. He finally did, and it was his friends
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Minor edit made here. This is what happens when you try and write from two different computers and the save option likes to be uncooperative.
Epic ending line 'Where are my Pants?'
I think Lyra took them ...or was it Rarity.
TRIXIE?!
Oh noooooesss!
Then again. . .
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Awwww, poor Trixie. Getting showed up while miles and miles away.
apple jacks words.... da fuck?
1005327 I love that gif.
Doctor Troll?
DAT ending >_> i saw it coming good sir
Not a bad idea to break a Cockatrice spell.
Talk about 'choking the chicken,' Eh?
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Cluck!