Really good keep it up

6557890 Thank you good sir.

somwhat depressing but existing

I like this.

Somethings I would spend the night at the offices trying to piece together the evidence.

I believe you meant 'sometimes'.

It was a Winchester Pre-64 model 70, had a scope, held three bullets, it even had a strap to carry over my shoulder.

Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe the Winchester Model 70 has the cartridge ejection port on the top. That and I'm not certain, but I believe the internal magazine held 4-6 cartridges, not 3. Has it been modified? Or does New York City require magazine plugs?

Sometimes he’d take me out hunting with him, and would teach me how to catch buck.

Don't you mean 'take buck'?

It's a very sad story this man tells.
Other than a few grammatical mistakes and some random words that should be other words, it's really good.
Keep writing, your good at it.

I like this. Continue.

I CAUGHT SOMTHING IN MY EYE! what is it? TEARS!!!!

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You can say that again...damn

Man.....that's really tragic....this man didn't deserves what happened to him. Fate can be such a unkind and cruel mistress. Always testing you at every stepping moment of your life where we least expected it.