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Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story? Will she be reaching Unstoppable Rage levels of anger? Will she be giving out any No Holds Barred Beatdowns?
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Well, I wouldn't say Rainbow Dash will be the one to do so... but that doesn't mean it won't happen.
7233449 That was the point of it. God, I still love that hillbilly bastard.
7233297 will she have her brains blown out? find out in the next episode coming 9999999909999999 years later
I don't like HiE stories with more than 1 human
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Well, neither do I. But for the sake of plot, realism, and storytelling, I decided to have more than one human.
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Thanks, swear to god I fixed that though... must be the sleep deprivation.
I want that rednecks skull to get bashed in sideways.
7233714 oh, ok. I respect that.
i am glad the next chapter will be switching over to applejack because with the sudden appearance of Howard and his group was just a major case of reader whiplash. i mean it happened right in the middle of your story's HiE first contact event. i dont know, but this kidnapping thing just seems a bit out of place to me. i will give your some major serious props if you can pull these two big events together. cant wait for your next chapter
Ok howard Is a dick and I'm confused.
Durham has a addiction apparently so that's all sunshine and rainbows.
Howard is a dickbag and there is a German shepherd that is willing to attack our poor MC.....damn he dead.
7242621 Oh, he's not dead... yet. I have much more planned for his character.
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I know he isn't dead but I'm saying he is going to be before very long on account of mister texashickshootem and lassie the bloody toothed wonder.
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Well, there is a reason as to why Howard showed up when James was walking through the forest, it is going to be explained in the next next chapter, hopefully for people to understand. And I realized that Howard and his group suddenly showing up would have some sort of backlash. But while realizing that, I also realized that I haven't given a legitimate reason as to why ponies hate humans and why humans hate ponies, the ponies hating humans part, hopefully.
And Howard showing up, being out of place and all, was sort of meant to be out of place, didn't realize it was THAT out of place though. The reason I added Howard and his group, is because I realized that the sort of change in character that I was going for wasn't going to happen with just James, so I had to throw more humans in, and low and behold, that's how the group was made.
But I know why Howard showed up when he did. I think it's pretty solid, and you should be able to tell with this chapter as to why he found James. Can you find it?
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Well, he won't have to worry about the dog for long, but that's all I'm going to say for now.
Okay, so the next chapter may or may not be over 5,000 words... just felt like giving you a heads up.
Howard is a dangerous ass-hole. If our protagonist gets a chance, he should kill him quickly. He will only become more and more of a problem in the future. In a survival situation, a person like that is more likely to get others killed than ever help the group. Having a psychotic, armed ass-hat around will not do anybody any good.
7261596 Hmm... I guess someone can see into the future.
7261659 Not at all, but I KNOW Human nature.