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Yeah not sure I'm going to continue with this story, I really don't like this kind of stuff where it's such an extreme reaction. Plus there is no way in hell he won't get in serious trouble for this (I mean serious jail time). I know he was panicking but even still that was overboard as he didn't have to shoot AT her just near her to scare her would have worked first. Also as far as I know this isn't an anthro story so Twilight doesn't have an 'arm' it's foreleg I think the word you were looking for and no it's not the same thing.
6757523 As for you not continuing reading, oh well. And the other part about serious jail time. I'm afraid I can't tell you if he does or doesn't, but I can say there will be repercussions. And thanks for catching that part about the arm, I must've slipped a little bit.
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Awesome story so far, you are doing a amazing job I can't wait for the next chapter![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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6757658 You might want to re-read the prologue very carefully.
6757663 Thank you, and it'll come some time in the next two weeks.
6757658 he has a revolver dude,you can open it and replace single bullets
6758756 First off, there is a 'button', I forgot what it's called, that does allow the revolver to drop all the ammo in its chamber, but you can still pull out the bullets one at a time if you wanted to.
6758947 I'll fix it really quick then.
6758947 Fixed.
P.S. I just realized what I did that made you confused, my fault.
Also, 69th comment heh heh. I'm funny.
Love it. Please continue
1,000 views... I don't know what to say.
6844571 True, she wasn't hunted like James will be, but there is a reason as to why they are hunting him and that will be expanded on in the next few chapters, hopefully.
And I'll also leave you to find out why Twilight believes in Diamond Tiara.
I'm liking this story more every chapter is quite good and it actually shows what a very panicked person with a gun will do if they come into contact with shit that isn't supposed to exist trying to strangle them.
That means all you pussy footers out there should take a lesson from this guy.
You don't become friends with things that attack you and claim you're a monster and try to capture you so YOU don't hurt them.....you fucking try and get away from them and shoot at them when they won't leave you alone.....least that's what I'd do.
6863385 Thank you for giving me recognition of my work. While I do believe the chapters are good, I feel like they could've been better. I know it sounds like I'm not giving myself enough credit, but I truly feel like every chapter is not exactly up to my high standards.
But still, thank you for the words of wisdom.
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Honestly your writing is fine and you've actually injected a bit of nature's own common sense into this misanthrope wonderland we call fimfic nowadays. While being friendly is certainly a plus, being a idiot is the reason the darwin award was made.
But I can appreciate the drive to improve one's self and skills and I find its a trait that is as noble as it is rare anymore.
So I look forwards to the next chapter with bated breath.
~Almighty
And you said the Ponies WOULDN'T treat him like shit? Twilight tries to fucking strangle him after assuming he's aggressive for no apparent reason. One more chapter before I abandon this. She could have just as easily pulled one of his legs out from under him WITHOUT almost murdering him.
god damm snobby ponies fucking always thinking shit like THAT PEICE OF CAKE IS ALIVE SHOOT IT!
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Ooh, blackmail. Never thought I’d see that on FimFiction.
I’m just teasing you.
6863385![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Now here's someone with common sense. It's survival of the fittest.
call me a terrible person but-
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