Rarity's Greatest Task

by Hidden Light

93:71 F.U.

The after math:

Rarity was sent to an asylum where she lived insanely, ever after

Twilight got away without anypony noticing, but now she no longer works for the agency.

Applejack lived but has a scar on her throat.

Winona was horribly injured, but she survived.

The SWAT team tracked the messenger on Rarity's watch and found the agency and arrested most of the agents working there, very few escaped.

The mare who messaged Rarity is still unknown, but some think the voice could have belonged to Spitfire, the leader of the wonderbolts.

Opal is only a robot made to receive messeges and capture footage.

No pony knows why the agency wanted Applejack dead.

Author's Note:

my first fanfic i've written, finished, and published. I didn't work hard at all and I can't promise there will be better fanfics made by me in the future...

Comments

[RisingMoon336]

Well. . . That was. . . Something.
Is there any chance you'll come back to this story and flesh it out so we know the details?

[blowngasket]

Well that was an interesting way to kill time. I honest have no idea what I just read, but it was still...umm...a story?

Ya know what, here is a picture just because.

fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/031/d/0/what_is_this_i_don_t_even_by_myminiatureequine-d5mnv8x.png

Your welcome.

[Hidden Light]

4043305 Probably. Though there might not be much improvement in the story line.

[Hidden Light]

4043311 Thank you...

[Applejack_8]

Rarity ya'll are a f****n murder
good story by the way

[Hidden Light]

4043414 Thank you

[Applejack_8]

4043419 yer welcome

[RisingMoon336]

4043335
Fair enough

[The Gardenhead]

OOOOOOOOOOK that. Was. Weird

[Applejack_8]

actually i haven't read it yet .......and i'm reading it and looks very nice

[Applejack_8]

gosh do a sequel explaning why they want AJ (im not a fan of pony's murdering AJ but this looks awsome )

[Applejack_8]

4043860 awsome :)

[Hidden Light]

4043840 Okay then, I'll see what I can do.

[Applejack_8]

4043872 yay

[Applejack_8]

4175888 Am confused of everything!!!! am confused why you look like dash and why am an human aj......really am not confused

[Hidden Light]

4043883 I'm really sorry, but I can't write a sequel. I have too much to do outside of FimFiction, and I cannot think of how the story should go. I'm not sure how I even came up with this story.

[Applejack_8]

4391773 i was kidding men i understand it :3