After an argument Rarity becomes so upset she sets of to leave Ponyville, but on her way tragedy strikes, Applejack only has a few hours to fix everything, before Rarity is lost forever.
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A wondrous tale of adventure and forgiveness, 10/10
oh geez the ridiculousness... and let's not even mention Fluttershy...
Too fast. Too many syntatic and grammatical errors.
Bluh bluh so confused.
Good concept but too fast paced, everypony seemed really out-of-character and some of the party antics were over the top.
368073 Thanks for the feedback, one of my first fan-fics, I mainly wanted to assess my writing style