wow

4053967 Indeed

4053977 agreed

... Dude..

Just... Just...

Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude...

Oh, Lyra...

4054188 Good dude or bad dude?

Why don't they have sedative? Seriously drug her first, it would be way more amusing.

Dude, make a chapter when they have to drug a pony.

Oh my god

4054908
HEY! STOP HAVING SO MUCH FUN! (FUN POLICE SIREN)

And...maybe. I'm open to other people submitting chapters but as of now the ponies in the main character slot are the ponies I have planned.

4054960 Someone else want's to write the outline I'll flesh it out...times a bit of an issue but whatever.

4054908

Fuck your mother.

4054993
Whoooooooooa, hey now. Fucking someone's mother has been done before, try fucking their dad or brother, maybe even their sister.

4054993 You douchbag.
4054997 Not helping

4055014 NOT ONCE DID I PROMISE TO HELP!

4055019 Fair argument...

its 12 AM, it hurts to laugh this much, what am I doing with my life?

I almost feel bad for Ten and Twenty. At this point I think they just want to go home.

"So here's my address." Lyra held a note for Ten. "Come by any time, I work from home so whenever's good for me."

Ten took the note and pocketed it. "Just...just get out." he lowered the main ramp and started pushing Lyra down the ramp.

"My favorite color's gold, I like sunsets, and I'm open for anything!" Lyra wobbled weakly off the ramp. "I love you--"

Ten closed the door and the ship took off. "Twenty!? I feel dirty...."

Orly, Ten? O-fucking-rly?!?!

That was quite possibly one of the most sexually appealing chapters I have ever read in any story
ten out of fucking ten

4056915 haha i fricken lost it when Lyra's giving them her phone number, haha xD its too much

The beginning of this chapter reminded me of this.

"Celestia praised her student as the nos grew louder."
-noise

These mares need to get laid . . . .

this...this is just...

Can we PLEASE have a part 2 of this chapter after the hiatus is over?

i was hoping for a "i need an adult" line in this chapter

Well. That was unexpected.

Hey, you ever wonder why we're here?

4065312 no i dont

4058959

No! Princess, NO!

Good girl...

OHHHH MYY

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Lyra. Just what?

(Also, most funny chapter so far. I think I now know what you cropped out of that story avatar...)

THAAAAAAAAAAAAT'S Lyra!

Note for future fics: Tag Lyra with some sort of fetish

I'm sorry a waited so long to read this! The shit is fun!
I'm not even reading it for the probing, just the characters reactions!

Lyra is best background pony.

Twilight got off the hook, while Lyra just got off.