• Member Since 23rd Mar, 2012
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Flutter Butter


Ah'm 13 years old and Ah love My little Pony. Hope ya'll like. Hehe. I don't really talk like that :) P.S. My name is Kassidy Williams (Kassy) <3

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Fluttershy tells Rainbow Dash her secret that could change their friendship forever. Will they remain friends?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 25 )
Comment posted by Geyshawins deleted Mar 24th, 2016
Comment posted by Geyshawins deleted Mar 24th, 2016

i think it was abit rushed. also the way it just jumped past the whole pinkie thing

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Thanks for the advise. It helps a lot. I'm not finished and there's a few more secrets coming your way :raritywink:

Aaww..thats sweet..............but i dpnt remember the first two chapters:pinkiecrazy:
Gonna go reread them

mother of celestia the nostalgia is hitting me like a train. best chapter yet! man, these were good times.
love this story ( btw this is joel./rainbow)

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OMG! JOEL! HEYYY! I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT!:pinkiehappy:

521628 keep up the good work my friend

It was good, but... it happened a bit fast...

Also, is the "secret" to be revealed? :moustache:

Hi flutter brutter I loved that episode by the way! And I can't wait to read it the next chapter! It's so awesome!

Yeah alittle fast there flutter! But I loved none the less. Try making longer chapters. Ok?

This is so badly written. I- I don't even know where to start criticizing it.

I read the first chapter, and even though it was rushed and the grammar could use some improvement, it was a really sweet chapter. I'm giving it a like.

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