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I can respect what you are saying more often you need a balance of mind and body in order to do this sort of thing.
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Why thank you, I try keeping everything within reasonable mind.
4116324 No problem and it does explain what exactly was holding Spike back in his powers.
quick question (which doesn't change how much I like the story because it's great), why do you leave italics on throughout the chapter? It bugs me. The story content is fine, but this little thing bugs me.
4116349 his fear Spike fears his very self that he will become a beast with a body of a monster like on his birthday
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Okay, that was a programing mistake. Thank you for pointing it out.
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You're right on that one, and I still think that Spike needs to finally confront why he burned the Canterlot library in the first place. He's still shying away from people, regardless of whether people like him, care for him, or not. At this pace, it's only a matter of time before that black goo emgulfs him again.
Good character with this Dusk character, even if he can get his parts wet because of his two marefriends (sorry, mind's in the gutter again ). Other than what Wolf, Blaze, and Lily have been doing for the twins, it's awesome that they actually have an actual dragon--well, a hybrid anyway--that knows what is going on and knows how to take care of them and let them be stronger. And Sweetie Belle, is it so obvious?? Just tell him already that you like Spike. Your friends already know. For all we know, you may be one of many ingredients that finally help Spike become one with who he is. (I still can see that he's still pining for Rarity, even when he says that he's over it)
And is it just me, or does it seem like both the twins are still on the "stop calling us babies" rant? Not as loud as previous chapters, but I can still see that in them, especially Quill.
By the way, nice to see that she's gonna be one hell of a warrior dragoness when she finally comes of age.
Have to say that Dusk is a little OP. but that is just me.