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very nice chapter very enjoyable read so what are your writing time now sidain
Question. Does spike and quill realise that whilst amethyst is being raised by twilight she is technically their little sister
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I hadn't even considered this and it makes it hilarious.
As much as this is a very serious chapter where the teams collectively put asides their differences and rivalries to focus on protecting Equestria, I'm quite pleased that you did give use some moments of brevity and levity where we can laugh and refresh a bit. And as much as it has the point of Twilight wanting to completely embarrass Spike in front of everypony and creature that was present, and how he handles it, personally I love this little passage a bit more:
I loved that RD did kinda stuck a fork in Rarity, even if only slightly....It showed contiuity between Spike and Rarity, as they are just associates now, rather than his puppy crush on her. It also showed to me that in a small corner of her mind, she still have feelings for Spike, but Rarity knows and understands that Spike is completely off-limits now with Cyclone and Veilstone literally on both of his arms, figurately and literally. And it was even better that RD's jab at Rarity's previous interactions w/Spike backfired spectactularly in RD's face where she realized that all of the Dusk clan siblings could read Dash like a book.
There are simply too many more things to name in detail, so I will leave it with this: It is definitely worth waiting for a little hiatus to bear to see this chapter. Well done.