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Okay, it looks like Spike is at least fed up with Rarity at the moment and a lot of heat is building up between him and Cyclone. Looks like Spike has a reason to get stronger, to be with her and for himself.
Absolutely loving this story. Nice to see that spike is finally getting someone.
~ The Rift Walker
Y'know, when this story first came out, I thought it was going to be some short simple wincest. But it has turned out to be so much more and I feel like it deserves way more recognition than it already has. Props to you Sidain for being an incredible story writer.
~ The Rift Walker
Congratulations, Spike. It seems like your balls have dropped, FINALLY.
Not too far though.
I'm still disappointed in him for still letting his past get to him. I have a sinking suspicion that if he doesn't get that under control, he's gonna be more regretful and depressed. And that could lead to some very dark fates ranging from the ghost heart completely taking over, to possible suicide (don't know how that would happen, but it could). That was a prime opportunity in my opinion to finally clear the air with Rarity and figurately wash himself of her forever. But like the previous times before, you let your fears get the best of you again.
And, Spike, I know that you still have you on guard because another female has started to flirt with you. I understand personally. Just for this once, let it actually sprout. There have been too many times where you snuffed the attraction because you claim that you were breaking it off for their sake. We understand that Rarity was lower than low for all that she did to you---basically toying with your heart like a spoiled brat and throwing the toy away when done. We saw what happened with the CMC---two of your former friends almost came to claws with each other because they both had crushes on you, and you make it so that they would stay friends with each other and you broke up with them before it even got started. I know what you're thinking--getting 0-for-3 in the romance department. Even your sister has her own special someone (surprising that your sister is a lesbian if you didn't already know).
All I'm saying, Spike is give this Cyclone a chance. She's a dragoness, yes, but more importantly, she saw your past, and your heartbreak, and apparently she knows her attraction to you is real. And I believe that at some point you need to tell Cyclone the entire truth between you and Rarity. How she purposely used your feelings to get her way w/o anything significant in return, that she stomped on your heart repeatedly even though it's kinda obvious that she knew of your affections for herself.
Like the chapter says, she's counting on you Spike. But more importantly, I think that eventually, you will realize that you will count on her. Don't let Cyclone get away.
As as afterword, pisses me off that the ponies are still dubious of dragons. Let the shit go.... It's no wonder that when Spike and Quill got to High Moon, they decided to stay, even though they knew that the Mane 6 as well as Celestia were looking for them to come home.
4670771 I am happy he finally told off Rarity and trying to look ahead to the future. But man I have never seen someone so scared to be with someone in my life. She wants to be with him and he can see it but he is such a scary drake that he can't take the chance of being with her. My only hope that THIS is the push he needs to get those limiters off and once he does he will finally get his mate. I just hope it wont be one of those things he wont act till she is in danger then confess his feeling. I mean really look at his sis how does she have more balls then he does.
THIS IS WHAT SPIKE NEEDS!!!!
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W-wow...I'm touched, really. To be honest, I didn't even think I'll get this far. Yet here we are 33 chapters in, and still counting. I, naturally, don't get anything from writing these stories. So all I got is you guys' words and comments, and I cherish each one I get. Thank you.
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Some British man's mojo? Here lemme see if I have some in storage somewhere. But nah, I know what ya saying.
4672236 Well he needs some mojo. I won't take away that he was able to dragon up for a second there but that second got crushed by all the teasing he let slip by. Hell If Spike wanted to win some real style points he would have pulled her in right there infront of Rarity and gave her a passionate kiss right there then stormed off. That would have been a straight Charlie Sheen move.... WINNING!!!!
i finale caught up YEAAAAH!!!!!!!
and im loving it..............MOAR
you are an amazing writer i love this story MOAR NOW!!! pls
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Man, if I was a changeling right now...heh. But seriously, thanks, I'm glad that ya'll are enjoying the story. Promise to keep the updates rolling for ya!
Quick question in this story, is the heart shape fire ruby big like in the show or is it small like Cyclone's missing dragon soul? Just curious.
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Uh...I dunno. I want to say yes? I dunno.