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Ritsuku


I am a military brony in the US Air Force.

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(BIG UPDATE: for the next few weeks I will be rewriting almost all of this story and hopefully finally finish it) Follow Iniquis, a young changeling and daughter of the Queen, as she leaves her home for the first time on a dangerous mission: to make Ponyville into a new hive. But when she runs into a pony she can't feed off of, she will discover there is more to a changeling than just the hunt. Will she succeed? Are the ponies of Ponyville doomed to follow the rule of a new changeling queen? Or will Iniquis find that fate isn't as set in stone as she once thought?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )
Comment posted by Ritsuku deleted Apr 8th, 2014

All of it has been updated so be sure to reread it if you like the story ^-^

So she jumped threw the window?:rainbowlaugh:

hello 4199548 question the queen is the mother of all workers in the hive?

7513874 sorry for the late response I am reworking this story... again... and I hope to answer some of the plot holes and rework it into the cannon of the show, as well as actually finish it. The first reworked chapter will be coming out this weekend. If you would like I can send you a message to the new reworked version when it is posted as these chapters will be removed.

Comment posted by Ritsuku deleted Sep 7th, 2016

7545147 I would love to see this new chapter:twilightsmile:

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