there is some dark forces at work here this nightmare night...snips tells us about this house that on the outskirts of town...it's suppose to have lot of rare candy. BUT no pony in there right mind where gonna take there foal's out side of town to some abandon mansion.
"and this is why i can't be trusted with foal's" Join Rahzzy an irresponsible unicorn that get himself and a few others in a world of trouble can they make it out of this mansion alive? Or will they all be picked off one by one. or will someone just dig them all in a deeper hole. "Maybe?"
My first attempt at making a story i'm not really trying to "make it to the top" like most fanfic makers. But i try to make a story that i and maybe others fine fun. Some of you might enjoy it. some of you might hate it some of you might hate me and just hate it because i'm making it!
You know ... compared to the last story I was forced to suffer through that was created by you!! This one is a lot better than the last one for sure because I can follow what is going on a bit more. Yes, of course, the grammar isn't all there, neither is all the spelling but we all know I look past those aspects and enjoy what I can read.
This time I was actually able to read it!! Keep up the work!!
Waits for Chapter Two
"I do not go , Bleh bleh bleh!!!" -Dracula, Hotel Transivania
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Thanks! unlike the last story it was rushed for something special. I'm not great at spelling and grammer but I do the best I can to make it as understandable as possible! so I hope this is still enjoyable despite my incapability's
And you get a light for getting the referents :3