Dinky Doo goes to a new school. She makes friends and enemies and have to take a big-big- test just for unicorns
Well my name is Vanessa-Wesline but everybody calls me Vanessa/
Dinky Doo goes to a new school. She makes friends and enemies and have to take a big-big- test just for unicorns
No lying pwease!
I don't mean this in any offense, but it reads like a child's book...which is really cute!
Hahaha, but I find it to be decent
Although, it has conten that bring it out of the rage of a "children's story"
Maybe a little more detail and flow of syntax will help the progression of the story.