A second-person fic involving you getting turned into Derpy Hooves.
Shit happens, and hilarity ensues.
Each part will be quite short, but I intend to update relatively often.
Cover art by Ritzy Kinetic
Chapters (7)
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I'm sorry, but I started laughing when I read that.
Couple of things I'd like to mention--
Paragraph formatting:
please pick one and stick with it. Switching back and forth is distracting.
And chapter length:
I know you said you wanted to make many short chapters, but in all honesty, you could probably combine most of everything you have here into one or two chapters. I have a general distaste for chapters under 1k words and would recommend trying for longer chapters.
Overall, I liked it, and I will be tracking to see where this goes.
3818412 Fixed, thanks for pointing that out.
I like where this is going.
"Bon-bon!"
"Lyra!"
"Doctor Whooves!"
Who the f!@# thinks bon bon best pony.
I hope this fic isn't abandoned. I'm not normally a fan of second person fics, but the fact that this one is "wake up, am horse" got me by that.
Aww, I missed this one I think! Plush in the Mail is such a cute scenario.
This was cute. Only a few issues like... where's the plushie?
Also doesn't Derpy have wings?
Every time I try to write lighthearted fics like this they always turn all grim and stodgy and political.
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I bet Lyra does.
Big RIP. Despite the janky formatting and chapters I could sneeze and miss, this kinda stuff is a great concept and overall it was decently executed.