In the ruins of a world they were never truly a part of two fillies travel with only each other as company, yet the elder starts to have doubts about their destination and wonders if everypony she loves is doomed to leave her. (EFNW '16 Finalist)
Luna is a mischievous filly loosely raised by her sister in a vast world that doubles as the home she barely remembers. Neptune is a humorless king who refuses to leave his home, both of them share a distant past although their paths have split.
After a brutal war between the Alicorns and the chaos bringers the two filly alicorn sisters are alone and have to set out on a journey to find their beloved parents
Awesome. This sounds like it's gonna be a real good origin story, mainly because I know what origin theory you're using. Just PLEASE fix your grammar and punctuation. Other than that, please continue the story. It's the only backstory of MLP I could find on here.
This has potential but needs to be edited badly.
3812723 okay
Awesome. This sounds like it's gonna be a real good origin story, mainly because I know what origin theory you're using. Just PLEASE fix your grammar and punctuation. Other than that, please continue the story. It's the only backstory of MLP I could find on here.
3813237 thanks i see what i can do il do my best on it
Good start.
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Yay! The next chapter.