• Member Since 18th Dec, 2013
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Borut_Vash


Vrhovni poveljnk GDIS

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It's was a pretty enjoyable story. Kinda short and sweet. Although I feel as though it feels a little rushed toward the end. As the grammar and spelling suddenly starts to degrade. But all in all a good story. :twilightsmile:

A few grammar mistakes, but otherwise a rly good story. :pinkiehappy:

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