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High in a tower of the Canterlot Royal Library there is a section that few may get into. In this section there is one book, and one book alone. The old leather cover bears the faded remnants of the title. All that remains is "The Book of _______ by Sin____ _____", but for those who know of the book, the Title is simply "The Book of Sin". The old binding strains to hold together as the book is opened up, but the writing on the inside of the book seems to stand directly against the wear of time on it's cover. Inside it is a story unlike any other, of an Earth Pony living on the old continent, who initially stayed under his own free will despite the leaders of the three species leaving for a new land to call their own. A tale of tragedy, and sorrow is said to be found in these pages, but what else could there be? Romance? Action? Adventure? Open his book and find out.
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This is my first fic, and most of the setting will be in the old continent, some time during the initial exodus to Equestria and afterwards. It's also written from the point of view of Sin, the main character of the fic. It is after all his own book.

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Comments ( 10 )

I like it. A lot. I find that the way you word this story fits perfectly into how someone might write in a journal. But maybe that's just because that's how I write in my journal. Ah well. All the same, great story!:pinkiehappy:

By the by, since you and I both appear to be authors just starting out here, could you take a look at my story? If it's not a bother of course. I welcome a gathering of new authors to become friends with each other. Maybe I should start a group...
Still like your story!

So, it turns out, I did make a group for authors just starting out here called Rookies on the Rise. I have branded you a "rookie" and am inviting you to join this group. As far as I know right now, I'm the only member and am inviting you to become a member. I've sent out "invites," I guess that's what you could call these comments, to other "rookie" authors in an effort to get various stories posted in this group to get more noticed. I'd appreciate it if you considered my offer.
For now, Silver, out!

I wanted to thank you personally for becoming my first watcher. The moment I saw the notification, I couldn't Stop smiling, therefore, I return the favor.

I think sin is severely depressed, oh and he said he was "slightly more than average height" and his sister is taller than he is........wait, exactly how tall is his sister???:rainbowhuh:

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I took the average height of a pony to be about the height of the mane six. Stallion's seem to be around this height or a bit taller, so I gave Sin about another inch and a half onto this basic height, and his sister had a height of about another half inch from Sin's height.

Also, yes Sin is depressed and when I get around to finishing more of this, you will see why

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Yes what of this story?

My brain can't handle the contradictions in this story.:applejackunsure:

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I'd appreciate some helpful hints please

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