A pony with no memory of his past, or even who he is or where he is, acquires the help of several ponies to try and figure out these many questions. The closer he gets to the truth, however, he finds more than he asked for.
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Shadow Fall
Heyo! I'm a writer, but I'm not the best by far. I merely try my best and hope others enjoy what I write. I also do some art and I do music. Besides stories I do poetry. Any questions please ask.
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...First story? I'll be honest, I couldn't tell.
I've just read chapter one, and I have a good image in my head of what's going on. Pinkie certainly seemed in character. The environment is described well, and the flow is actually fluid. That's more than can be said for my own first story. Hehe.
The only thing that felt off was his reaction. He seemed really concerned, and within minutes, he was almost accustomed. It seemed. That's the only thing that threw me off a bit. Otherwise, it all flows well.
And on a personal note, I have a soft spot for sentence fragments. I know they're not grammatically correct, but when I saw these, my hopes soared.
And I'm still on CH1!
Although I enjoy this fiction, I have one question, How does your OC know Fluttershy's name?
Twilight says her name when she asks if Fluttershy is okay. When Fluttershy responds he puts the two together. And thank you Time. I tried not to move too fast, though I know it seems that way since the chapters are short, but I tried to avoid him just knowing what to do.
3784053 After reading the other chapters, I almost entirely forgot about that. The story just flows so well! You've either got a gift, or have had a lot of practice. Or both.
Oh, well, everything suddenly makes sense, now.
I'm just wondering about what Sombra's going to do about Cadance, since she technically holds the throne to the Crystal Empire right now. I mean, maybe not technically. Maybe literally.
4334484 You will see soon enough. There's only... 7-8 chapters left actually. Y'know... I actually didn't think about it when I said a week, but it really works out with what I have planned. As to what that plan is. Well, you'll just have to wait and find out.