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DangerousBox


He is the guy that wrote a story

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Somehow, someway he made it to Equestria. Meeting familiar faces we all know and love, will Anon be able to bring justice to Equestria? Or will he die trying?

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HEALLO! MAH NAHNE AS SANIC HEGEHOG! AH LAHK YUR STARHY! UAPVOHTE!

What the buck :rainbowlaugh:......"Flashed his pecs. "

I really hate these types if stories, this was poorly written, rusted, sex thrills for no reason, well I don't read clop so maybe that's just how it works, anyways it had no story to the character, he just come from a wormhole and he just happens to be a Mary Sue and it's just! I don't like it... I'm sorry, guessing your new, if you read my human stories, I put 3 k words to just explain the beginning and such, anyways. Don't let hater bring you down (that's me) and continue but please just find someone to help you out okay?

An uninspired lampoon of uninspired cliche stories.

This was not funny in the slightest :ajbemused:

Woah there sir... Umm are you actually planning to keep this going.... And if you call this a serious story then I won't help you...

If you're doing this as some kind of trollfic... Then be my guest... I sometimes enjoy random, comedic stories....

My suggestion is to think of what you're doing and decide what you are going to do with this before it gets your feelings hurt...

I can say that this story seems like a random, comical and somewhat clop...
They usually do well when they are intended as so...

Comment posted by DarkenShadeOC deleted Jan 10th, 2014

3746495 ok... I see... At least say that in your story description or something...

Successful fics like the one you're writing are successful because they are random and haves lots of comedy in it ... Plus like i said its intentional for them to write like this and get the likes because the reader knows not to take it seriously

3746531

Huh, could have sworn I was the writer and not DarkenShadeOC...

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My goal was to make this as bad as the average HiE fic, and I think I succeeded.

3750300 oops... Lol and ok ... I understand... Just trying to figure out if that was your intention

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yeah, later on I realized you were trolling or something, but... I wouldn't do this, just seems like your bringing hate to yourself :unsuresweetie:

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And that's why I made this account. Don't wanna ruin my rep on my main account.

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ohhhhhhhhhhhhh.......... IT ALL MAKE SENSE NOW! :pinkiecrazy:

>protagonist's name is "anon"

Automatic dislike. Not even going to read.

3752013

Really? It isn't the terrible summary? The overused idea that's been seen literally thousands of times? Or from the summary, word count and it being marked as "complete" subtly tell you it's a troll fic? No, it's the fact his name is Anon. THAT is the reason you dislike...

This fanfic is incredibly stupid, and it breaks my heart I found someone who surpasses it in that aspect.

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Oh, I'm aware it's shit.

The "Anon" part made me dislike and move on.

The fuck did I just read?

as a piss-take its pretty damn good, as a fic, It is freaking horrible. good thing it is a piss-take

3746531

Yes i also agree but there is also a line between random funny and just plain out stupid

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and just plain out stupid

Coming from the guy that doesn't know how that saying goes, that hurts.

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Dude i can right a way better fan fiction then you honesty, if you actually
had a thought process then you would know that i wasn't trying to use an expression. BTW you story sucked can you take it down really just a waste of time.

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If it's such a waste of time then why are you here :rainbowhuh:? Seeing as how you continue to reply, you clearly have no life, seeing as how that's the only explanation why you would knowingly waste your time.

I have a life the reason why i reply because no one else can put you in your spot, i am sure mainly People would love to say how bad your sto- never mind story this is just piece of shit you pulled out of your ass. look at all the dislikes you have no one likes your shit at all. And if you still think i don't have a life, i only reply back when i am done with work ( in my free time). In case your mind couldn't comprehend that.

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Hate to say it, but you're still wasting your free time. You could be out playing a game of baseball, watching a tv show, writing a MLP fanfic. Instead, you're here arguing with a guy about a shitty story. Most ppl with common sense would have walked away by now, but not you. Instead you opt to tell someone something they already know: That there story sucks. Did you really think this was supposed to be a masterpiece? This was meant to upset ppl, to get a rise out of someone, that's why it's a trollfic. And from your reaction it's clear I succeeded.

Comment posted by forevertheDoctor deleted Jan 14th, 2014

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Someone with common sense would think this story had any outline to it and it wasent trolling if the other person felt trolled in which i don't in fact u helped me improved my writing and also gave me more detail of how you live as person, but i wont go into details. thank you for showing me what not to do it really helped. no really!

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lol the best.... worst shit i ever seen. My bad read!

FUCKIN' SAWX!

Hmm, the taste of this story is a bit off...
Oh I know!
{Whispers} Sonic crossover

It need more salt.

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