A heartbroken Spike goes through the magic mirror to find love and acceptance in the EG universe.
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I gotta say I like this. My only gripe is that the ending up in Rarity's room enchantment part seems forced but I got nothin better so good job dude.
Somewhat short, but still amazing. I REALLY liked it.
Alright, that explanation was a bit far-fetched, didn't quite answer everything, and it seemed like you came up with it as you wrote this chapter, but I'll take it for now.
I could see this becoming something I would really like if its going into the direction I think it's going in
THIS.
Is why I love Rainbow Dash's personality
You know when I favourited this, I thought it would be a fun read. I was wrong. This is just great!
Good dialogue, nice pace, and a good feeling overall. Well done
3807607 Actually, this is the average length I usually write for my other stories. I just made the first chapter a bit longer than I normally do. The next chapter might hit 4k or a little above. Depends on how much time I have.
love it cant wait for more!
Just came across this. I'll agree with some of the others that the RariTwi romance kind of came out of nowhere and the way it was done does indeed annoy me a bit. A better way to have handled it would have been where the two haven't been together for that long, mainly discussing how they feel and they only just decided to give it a try, with them telling Spike. But before they got the chance, he stumbled across them and things blew up in a misunderstanding.
3807738 And why I on the other hand hate it.
Great update as I did enjoyed Rainbow Dash's entrenance into the story.
Keep up the good work.
This chapter was way better written. I'm glad that you proved me right to have favorited.
Another excellent chapter. Hooray for MacinDash as well!
3808804 I've gotta be honest with you. I ALWAYS have trouble writing the first chapter of any story. It's really weird because writing anything past that just gets easier as time goes on. I dunno, I can't really explain it. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
I feel really sad for Twilight. Yeah she kinda did wrong but her little brother just teleported away on her and she has no idea where. She doesn't even know he left Equestria, The poor girl is pprobably still frantically searching for him. Couldn't spike send a note back through the portal before it closes or something. I know the note may not be found for a little while but it would eventually get to Twilight.
We're does Discord come in? Would he be the janitor or something? I'm pretty sure there's a fiction about Discord being the janitor... Oh god, I can see it now.
Spike: well at least I haven't met Discord's counterpart...
Rarity: Oh, you mean the janitor? His name isn't Discord, but that's what he insists every calls him... He's a little crazy though.
Spike: Janitor. Of course. God of Choas... =... Janitor. Seems legit.
Enjoyable from stat to finish, and RD just made it that much better. Excellent job. So glad I favorited this story.
Wow, they're so HUMAN! Like, RD's mannerisms are prefect! I can already tell this is going to be great.
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Doggie Spike x EG Rarity or Doggie Spike x Regular Rarity. Either of those sound like good times to me.
3808889 does this means we get more soon ?
How many chapters long did you plan on making this?
3809603 Discord will show up when you least expect it! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png
3812410 Not sure, but at least 50k words +
3813739 I see.
3812014 Soon...is such a subjective term.
Good really good.
Well there goes the juicy conflict You remind me of another author who builds this type of exciting shit up and then immediately he pusses out and the character automatically forgives the one that hurts/betrays/almost killed him just like that. So in other words your starting to disappoint me. If that's the case then there's no point of even showing what's going on in Equestria if were not gonna get some intense drama and conflict/punishment.
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Again Unless you only watched the movie once or you easily forgetful, Spike already mentioned that he was a dragon in the movie.
Please pay attention next time so you don't screw up again.
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...
More.
3813788 i play planes and mercs, a post by post only tabletop rpg...
one mission took us one year ... so yeah, i know how soon 'soon' can be
(and we could have done it in about a month if everyone had the time)
3815447 Notice I said "hate" that doesn't mean he won't be angry at her. There will be conflict, oh yes, but Spike is just accepting the fact that he'll still love Twilight regardless. I assure you, the shit will hit the fan down the road. i453.photobucket.com/albums/qq260/spacewings/EmoteDimondMad_zps1373258d.png
3817092 Currently, I have three active stories. I try to produce a chapter a week, alternating between the three. That puts my production at about 1-2 chapters a month. Unless someone wants to take up the unfathomable burden of a colab, then that's the best I can do.
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..??? It sounds you just contradicted yourself. He's angry at her but he's accepts her anyway. That doesn't make any sense.
If anything he should more PISSED at Twilight than Rarity. Sure he found out the she was being a fucking cocktease to him for free labor, but Twilight betrayed his trust. As you have written, Twilight is like a big sister to Spike, they have been together their whole lives and he has always been there for her whenever she needed it, but cant say the same the other way around. She got into a relationship with the mare that she knows he loves, but decided to continue it in secret while he continues to fantasize the relationship he dreams of even though she knows its never gonna happen now. By keeping it a secret that relationship between the two has shattered and now he sees her for what she is, a selfish mare that only cares about herself. Now he sees that Twilight doesnt think of him as a little brother but just a assistant/pet. This should now open his eyes as to why he was a dog the first time, because that's how Twilight sees him as. Not as a brother, or a pony, or not even as a equal. Just a lap dog that she has him jump through hoops.
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Am I getting through to you? Have I made my point? That is why he shouldn't forgive her(especially so easily)
3819384 still a good pace then hehe
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... That would help if I wasn't a teenage semi-pervert.
3819391 Allow me to unrustle your jimmies. Spike, for the moment, feels that he can forgive Twilight and love her regardless. Yes, he said that. HOWEVER, that doesn't mean that he won't be changing his mind later. Sadly though, if I told you what I had planned...it would spoil the story.
Just be patient, that's all I ask. fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/014/c/3/fitwi_by_comeha-d7252jt.png
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So first he was angry at her, then forgives her, and then he will be angry at her again later?
3824739 Yes, in the future she will do something that will...strain their relationship further. To the point where Spike starts questioning a lot a things.
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.......???? So even after all that she did to him, she's going to do something even worse?! Okay you have my interest once again. >:)
whoa! take it easy on the language! as well as the sexual hints man! they are still teenagers!
3862204 I don't know how you were as a teenager, but that was about spot on for my friends and I. That and, they're all 17-18 btw.
4136622 In the movie they were 17/18, but in this story, 5 years have gone by, they are in their 20's... I think the swearing in character sort of speak, especially rainbow...
Nnope.
Now I remember why I hated this garbage, hell no.
God why Did i have to drink so much fucking coffee!? I felt like i was gonna vomit everytime i read coffee.
Otherwise i like the story keep 'er goin.