A heartbroken Spike goes through the magic mirror to find love and acceptance in the EG universe.
Page generated in 0.044 seconds
Total duration
626 users online
1,235,360 hits today, 2,064,738 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Oh wow, that date turned into a silly train wreck in a hurry.
Also, "Discord did it" is kind of a cop-out...
More of this?! All I gotta say to that is:
Now onto specifics: A month without nookie?! That's harsh! (Never mind the fact that dear, sweet, innocent little Fluttershy is saying it in the first place)
Rainbow Dash a slushie fanatic?...Yeah, I can see that. (Also, you knew that no panties thing would come up and bite her later) And Rainbow on a date...adorable (even though she'd probably beat the crap out of me for thinking it)
5143363 And yeah, 'Discord did it" is a bit of a cop out, but seriously; how would you explain that the mirror to the human world (the one that turned Spike into a dog last time) not only changing Spike into a human, but depositing him in Rarity's room?
And lastly; Thank you for showing the finally showing the progression in Equestria since Spike left!
Well, didn't expect Fluttercord to be in here. I especially loved the part where she just dumped the cheese puffs into the yogurt. And the date between Rainbow and Trevor was not bad either.
Oh no! I can already see what happens. Rainbow wakes up and sees her current predicament and the fact she's lost her panties and that she was drunk so she doesn't remember so she thinks Trevor took advantage of her. If this happens I so called it ! If it doesn't, then congratulations for something new. Other then that, another awesome chapter to an awesome story
....I'm sorry, but withholding sex just because he doesn't tell you everything that happens with the current situation is definitely the last thing she could think of . Also, she's pregnant (and could be at those times where she could be horny as hell, must be the hormones)---seems to me that there has been a lot of sex already between her and Discord, hence the big baby bump. So another withholding himself for an hour definitely will not work. Discord's gonna fuck his ShyShy twice as vigorous as he usually does when he returns from the human world anyway not to mention most likely she's gonna jump him when he returns. It's a can't lose in Discord's case!!
That is sstill one of the funniest things I have read today---and we haven't even gotten the evening really started yet. Well done, thanks for that
I wonder when some of the others on the Equestria side will eventually learn (possibly from Twilight's mouth, but more likely by Discord) what Spike has done and even more shocking, that he's not coming back to Equestria. He's finally gotten what he wanted most all his life in another dimension; why would he even want to visit back, unless it is just to see that his old acquaintences are safe and sound (that way there are no regrets at all).
I love the tone of this. It's so much better than I thought it was gonna be, I originally thought it was gonna involve Spike being mopey, he runs a way, he goes to a new world learns that the grass isn't always greener and Twilight and the others go find him and convince him to go home and Spike has to accept his lot in life.
I'm so happy that I was wrong. I like that this focuses on other characters as well as Spike and Rarity. as well as how this story allows the reader to have their cake and eat it. It has shipping, clop, humor, friendship and adventure.
I'd like to imagine that Twilight in her closure seeking mode would be able to see that Spike is happy in the parallel universe, because I think that's her main motivation is that she's trying to resolve things with Spike. It's not about getting him to go back home, it's about making sure he's satisfied with his new station in life. I dunno maybe I'm reading too much into this.
5145272 "W-waffler-senpai, If you stroke m-my ego too much I'll...AHHHHNNNN~"
medias.gifboom.com/medias/t_a4c7628f279244e08ea7d165c8eae0db.jpg
Now there's just one thing left for this story to need to have: Twilight needs to meet Twilight.
At least we finally get something from the other side of the mirror.
At last we finally see what's going on in the other world(for only half a chapter and from the looks of it, that's all we're getting.) I'm wondering is there a time difference between dimensions? How long has Spike been gone from Equestria? I would have like this part to have been expanded to see how his disappearance has affected everyone(Already showed how Twicorn was affected, now I want to see Rarity.)
Also now that Rainbow Rocks is out, are you going to change things with this story to keep it somewhat canon?
Oh, Dissy, ya done goofed.
5146026 I'll try and answer your questions without spoiling too much.
1). There is a time difference between the dimensions. However, I hesitate to get into specifics because I KNOW some readers will try to pick it apart and tell me that it makes no sense. Just for the sake of argument, Spike's been in the EG-verse for about a month while a few months have passed in Equestria.
2). I will go into greater detail as to what happened on the Equestrian side, via flashbacks/dreams as experienced by Twilight Sparkle.
3). Rainbow Rocks WILL NOT have any impact on this story.
5145764 There is only one Twilight. i453.photobucket.com/albums/qq260/spacewings/EmoteTwilightWet_zps61ffef2a.png
5147008
But what about that one scene with Pinkie explaining why Twilight looked familiar.
5147676 I think you're confused. That was Spike she was talking about, not Twi.
5148198
I'll trust you...for now.
Finally got around to reading this. First of all, it's nice to see how things are going in the EquestrIan Universe. I do wish we also had some small bit of seeing how Rarity is taking Spike disappearing from the face of Equestria. I'm pretty sure she must be taking it hard as well considering what she did and how she broke his heart. I do hope we see some reaction from her and maybe a small scene between her and Spike about patching things up.
Secondly, I do wonder how Twilight just thinks to look in the human world. How did she come to the that conclusion? Another thing I hope is that when Twilight finds Spike, she doesn't ruin things for him and screw him over. I know Spike said he'd probably forgive her, but I doubt he's going to be so forgiving so fast.
Thirdly, the Rainbow date thing was cute and I hope things do work out for her and Trevor.
All thing considered, I hope Twilight doesn't screw up Spike's new life.
5156605 Like I told Shadowbolt, I intend to give everyone a peek into how things having going on the Equestrian side through Twilight's flashbacks/conversations with Spike.
As to your question concerning how she found out where Spike was: It's been a few months since he's disappeared (on the Equestrian side due to the time dilation between the universes) so Twi's had quite a bit of time to exhaust her search options. Again, it will be explained through Twilight.
I know it can difficult to wait for explanations in stories sometimes. Believe me, I've been there myself with some of the fics on here. But I ask that you have a little patience. The last thing I want is to give my readers a huge info dump chapter. It's just...not something I can rush into, ya know?
5156837 I understand that you don't want a chapter to be nothing but an information dump. I didn't mean to come off as someone who's criticizing some plot hole. I had a feeling you would explain it anyway.
One other question. Will we see Rarity, the Equestria version, later on with her own reaction about Spike leaving and how to fix things?
5156989 If I do decide to include the original Rarity, she won't show up for a very long time. It would most likely be a short cameo that I'd include at/or near the end of the story.
5157032 Alright, whatever works. I'm sure she's probably upset too about how Spike ran off and feels bad about what she did to him.
You... you have never had alcohol have you? It doesn't work like that.
Either way, still cute as hell.
5238516 Oh, I know it doesn't. My dear, sweet reader. It was a shameless attempt to make RD as cute as possible, you see. roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/mlp_allears.png
5239164 please please please get the next chapter out soon! I read all of the current chapters in about 4 hours and I need more ;( it's really good though.
Personally, I love this chapter. It was super funny and I love the flutter shy and discord in marriage. In this chapter discord also got kind of a mentor role, Not really but it was pretty close. I also love the date with Rainbow Dash how and set of trying to actually talk she got her self drunk. Love your story keep up the good work .
5145393