A heartbroken Spike goes through the magic mirror to find love and acceptance in the EG universe.
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When we tune in next time, Spike has been banging his head against a wall since she left
WOW, now Rainbow has a man interested in her. AWESOME!!!
Trevor.... who's magical... you didn't get inspiration from this chap, by any chance?
For some reason, Trevor Lunamoon's voice sounded like either George Cloony or Alucard from Castlevania LOS 2.
loved the chapter, can't wait to see how rainbow's date will go.
Gulp!!
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Nope, more like this Alucard.
First AJ and Sunset with each other, then Fluttershy, then Rarity and Spike, and now Rainbow Dash has found someone?! Who's next, ?
4752531 AJ, Shy, Rarity (She is the main character, after all) and Dash were all 100% part of the shipping schedule. As for Pinkie, I have no idea. I'm open to suggestions but I rarely write romance for her so...that's why there isn't a plan.
4752611 Sorry. For some odd reason seeing as how you got the rest of the Humane 5 paired up, even with Applejack and Sunset Shimmer together (very original idea by the way! ) (I supposed it should be the Humane 6 then) I just randomly thought that Pinkie Pie might get one too. Who knows, maybe she ends up with Human Cheese Sandwich somehow? I don't know. It's your story man. You do it however you want.
I can only see him getting this ring:
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4752797 No need to apologize, your hypothesis is 95% correct. Pinkie has always been a difficult character for me to write, despite the fact that people seem to enjoy my portrayal of her. Conversely, Rarity is very easy for me to write.
As for CheesyPie? I dunno. That's a bit too cliche for my taste. I like to do unique ships (with the exception of Sparity, of course). To me, it's all about making those unusual pairings believable such as in the case of SunnyJack. By all means, if you have a good idea I'll use it. Hell, I'll even give you credit for it. Just...try to avoid any lesbian stuff. One pair is enough for this particular story.
4752866 Yeah you're probably right about Cheese Pie. But Honestly I do not see any other pairing that could work for her.
Have you ever heard of SapphireLibra3? I once saw her do a shipping between Pinkie and Rainbow Dash as ponies in her Inner Demons series. Did not see that coming.
Anyway I can't really think of anything off the top of my head. If you don't want to add a Pinkie Ship to the story, that is perfectly fine as well. I mean that is what you were originally planning on, right?
For crying out loud you practically blew my mind at the SunnyJack shipping you did. I have seen pairings between Twilight and Sunset, Sunset and Flash Sentry, Sunset and Shining Armor, Sunset and Rarity, Sunset and Fluttershy, Sunset and Spike, even a story that supposedly was meant to imply a shipping between Sunset and Pinkie Pie.
Your story here is probably the VERY FIRST one I have seen involving a shipping between Sunset and Applejack.
Yes.
Well, Rarity seemed appropriately upset given what happened, if only just. I still feel like someone needs to scream at those two, oh well. I don't know why Rarity is so worried, of course Spike will be patient with her, he came from another world to be with her for Celestia's sake. I honestly don't think Spike would care if it took years for them to get to the point of having sex, he'd still stick with her and love every minute of it.
So we have Cheerimac, one of my favorite ships but....... Isn't Big Mac a student? So wouldn't that type of relationship be illegal?
Kinda cool that you were able to ship Dash with someone, even if it's with a rule 63 Trixie.
4753610 I feel like I need to explain a few things. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy_umad.png
1). Remember that Alt. Universe tag? Well, it means that some things are a wee bit different in this particular EG-verse than in the original movie. Mac is 25. Cheerilee is 27. So no, it's not illegal.
2). Trevor Lulamoon isn't a R63 Trixie. He's her brother. And in case you're wondering, he's 21.
That ring seems fitting.
DAT NEW COVER DOH.
D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW
Trevor the Magician, my mind went to:
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He'll pull a Minigun from his sleeves and make you Swiss cheese.
4775927 Hey buddy! How's come you think I'm arrogant? I don't think I'm arrogant. That's more Dashie's thing. And why don'tcha think I'd know about sex? I mean SEX is only like THE FUNNEST thing ever...except for diving in a vat of chocolate icing!!
I love the new cover pic
Uh, wait. So is she saying it's NOT okay for him to stare at her butt? You've got a bit of a confusion of dialogue here, especially given the surrounding context.
except
Don't do this in narrative. This entire phrase needs to be deleted. It's okay for dialogue, but not for narrative unless the narrative is first-person.
Once again, you're breaking narrative etiquette. This sort of thing doesn't have any business being in third-person narrative.
4775927 Let me introduce you to the difference between the word "arrogant" and the word "ignorant":
ProTip: The word you meant to use was ignorant, not arrogant.
4794240 I fixed the dialogue like you suggested, because now that I think about it...the lines did sound a bit stupid. As for Rarity: She's being hesitant. On one hand, she does want Spike to look at her but...she also isn't quite ready for sex. You could call it a conflict of interests I suppose. Sorry if it confused you.
4752611 Cheese seems like a great guy for her.
4794240 You know your stuff. Wait... *checks name* MYTHRIL MOTH! I didn't expect to see you here!
4796818 Well, of course he does. Cheese is essentially Pinkie with a scrotum. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy_umad.png
4796900 Exactly. Who better for Pinkie Pie than someone equally as loco in the coco?
4796917 I dunno, I'll think about it. But at this point and time I really don't have a set shipping for her. Ideally, I'd like to ship her with someone unusual and not cliche like Cheese. In any case, enjoy this hilarious comic I found!
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4798646 That is magnificent.
4823557 I say, shoot the clowns as much as they want.
4796917 That's why I suggested it.
4846019 You magnificent creature, you.
So when can we expect the next chapter to come out?
4892684 Today, if everything goes according to plan.
4894017 Yay!
So, you had Spike meet Rarity's parents in, what has to be, THE most awkward way possible (with Pinkie "helping") and had Rainbow Dash get a date with an apparently stunning young gentleman? For the former, kudos, well done. As for the latter, I think this says it all:
4826189 Not a big fan of the clowns either, huh?