A heartbroken Spike goes through the magic mirror to find love and acceptance in the EG universe.
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does each couple get their own chapter or are the Sparity and Flutterburn storys geting put in the same chapter?
I like the name Sunset Apple better, it sounds like a tropical drink in my opinion.
4368253 I'm not sure yet. Depends on how much material I can write. As of now, they'll likely be rolled into one chapter.
4368278 What about....SNAPPLE?
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4368545 What can I say? Demon Sunset is hot. dl.dropbox.com/u/21167245/FiMFiction/Emoticons/misc_Spit_Dayum.png
Will Twilight and Rarity go thru the mirror and try to convince Spike to return to Equestria?
4368834 Twilight will be making an appearance. However, she won't be appearing for while yet. As for pony Rarity, no she will not.
Who else skipped a few... *Ahem* 'awkward' parts of the story?
Anyways, I loved the story so far, but was a bit left out on what Spike and Rarity were doing. Either this was to be a cliff hangar to build up some time. Or just put in parts. Oh well, love the story!
OH DAMN!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!
4369762 This is indeed meant to be in parts. Sparity/Flutterburn are going to be in the next chapter.
You...skipped the sex?
YOU BIG MEANIE!!! I WORKED REAAAALLY HARD ON THAT PART!!!
Just kidding. Glad you liked the chapter.
75 degrees? In the desert? In JUNE? You, my good author, do not know your temperatures.
4373310 Well, I don't live in the desert. So please, by all means, enlighten me. fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/013/8/1/twieww_by_comeha-d72140f.png
>4373511 Speaking as someone who lives in the South, one could reasonably expect a hot June day to be at least in the low nineties. However, as this event is clearly meant to parallel the Summer Sun Celebration, which takes place on June 22, one can assume the temperature to be 98 or 99 degrees, if they're lucky.
4373630 Hold on a second, I believe there's been some confusion. When I said the temperature was in the seventies, that was during the morning. Not during the middle of the day.
Applejack stuttering...can't say that I pictured her doing that, but that's just me. Anyway, great chapter as always and I can definitely picture the next two going off without a hitch. ...Well, unless Flutters gets drunk again.
4375482 That was what I was trying to say, but seemed to have dropped the ball. I was mostly trying to get someone to remove the stick from their ass.
Although, that does explain why Rarity has a house. I'll admit that caught me off guard.
4368875 Human Twilight out of nowhere?
4378477 Ooooh you! I'm not telling you how it happens. IT WOULD BE SPOILING THE SURPRISE! You'll just have to be patient darling~
4375482 Yes 5 years have gone by in Equestria. The human Mane 6 are all around 18, having just graduated High School.
Bear in mind that the time flux between universes IS NOT consistent. Meaning, time passes far faster on the Equestrian side, than the human side. That is the story's official cannon. As for Spike, he's about 20. So he's more or less the same age as the rest of them.
4375812 Rarity does have a house, but not for the reason you're thinking. It's actually quite important to the story later on.
4380048 Oooo, okies. I shall await this developing importance then.
4373656 Oh. Well, my bad.
i have a question:
will spike ever return back to equestria after he gets human rarity to love him?
will he ever return equestria and shove it in front of the counter parts?
will he ever make love to human rarity?
will I ever have my questions answered?
I must find out when you reply!
...LOL!
4402515 Patience my young Padawan. All will be revealed in time.
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Very well...my master...
Can't Applejack and Sunset have some bushes on them? I hate shave, and I'm sick and tired of it. I feel that at least AJ, Sunset, RD, and Pinkie should have unshaved 70's bushes. Would fit them nicely.
Other than that, good story.
4437869 EEEHHH? That...has to be the strangest complaint I've ever received.
But...if you really want, I can give Pinkie a hairy cooch the likes of which would make a 1970's porn star blush.
4439921 Ok, I say give Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Applejack & Sunset Shimmer un-shaved 70's bushes, and Rarity's can be heart-shaped. And if Twilight shows up, give her a 70's bush too. Cause to me, Pinkie, AJ, RD, and Twilight don't come off as the shaving type to me at all. Just saying.
As for Pinkie, I say give her a 70's bush that inflates and deflates just like her hair. Get all puffy with she's happy or aroused.
Oh! Nicknames: AppleBush, Twibush Sparkle, Bushity, Flutterbush, Rainbow Bush, and Pinkie Hair-Pie.
I know that clowns are kinda creepy, given how they're portrayed and all, but even shooting them in the face seems a bit severe. (Loved the part about the basket though. )
Yes, so much yes.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~