A heartbroken Spike goes through the magic mirror to find love and acceptance in the EG universe.
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I never expected Fluttershy to do that. But at least it's with someone who cares for her.
Good fic, personally I have a theory that Spike was supposed to be a dog in his own universe, but somehow he got switched with the human version, which explains why he's sorta treated like a pet in Equestria.
Oh... Oh.
Oh...My....*blushing like mad*
im blushing so bad omg great story haha
That escalated rather quickly xD
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Hahaha! I've done my job then. fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/013/0/2/nerdgasm_by_comeha-d72140i.png
Yay this means Spike and Rarity will get their own chapter. Also this was a good one too i like how you subverted expectations and made Braeburn and Fluttershy's chapter happen outside of the festival very clever.
The love making was WAY too quick in my opinion. I think you could have lengthen and added more detail to it a bit. Other than that, it was a decent chapter. I'm more excited to see how you do Spike and Rarity, the stars of this story.
4466858 I was originally going to blob Shy and Rarity's chapter together but I decided to make them separate. That's why it took a little longer for this chapter to come out. I needed more time to create the *ehem* extra scenes.
If you know what I mean...
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I know what you mean
4467217 Well...you certainly seem to like pubic hair. Good for you.
I'm not really a big fan of it myself. In fact, I keep mine shaved most of the time. It's just so...unsanitary and ungainly when it grows too long. So I get rid of it.
BUT! If you want your women to look like they're smuggling Chewbacca in their crotch, that's fine. I can respect that. However, I won't be giving all of my characters hairy pussies. It just ain't happenin', Sugarcube.
The only thing I have to say about this is that the sex between Fluttershy and Braeburn (also Applejack and Sunset Shimmer) were way too sped up. I recommend trying to do more when you write the sex scene between Spike and Rarity, give more detail, make the moments last longer.
4467629 Fair enough, I suppose. To be honest though, I'm not incredibly talented at writing drawn out sex-scenes. All I can promise is that I'll try my best to make the Sparity scene (yes, there's going to be one ) as intimate as possible.
Woowoo! Flutterjob! Hawt.
Threesome with Little Strongheart to follow?
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Amen to that!
4467720 Understandable, but still I really do like this fic. It may not have a lot of my shipping preferences, but it at least has Sparity and that's all that matters so far.
4468687 Just out of curiosity, what are your shipping preferences?
I came here to sparity.
Not to ship others.
4468730 Sparity, Twiluna, Fluttermac, Soarindash, Caramelapple, Pinkieburn, Doctorditzy, Lyrabon, Vinyltavia, Trixblood, Shiningdence, Celesticord, Scootabelle, and Snailbloom.
I feel like I have to point something, this is the second chapter in a row that involves two characters hooking up and almost immediately they start having sex. Apparently in your head as soon you become a couple you go straight to sex.
It's like this:
"I love you."
"I love you too.
"Let's fuck."
"Okay."
If that's the case then what's taking Spike and Rarity so long since everybody is getting laid on the first day?
Also we don't get much time to enjoy the actual sex and you end it too quickly that it lacks climax.
4469610 Both AJ + Shy knew their prospective love interests for an extended period of time. So, they'd naturally have a stronger inclination towards sex, despite the recency of their confessions. Spike and Rarity have only just started getting to know each other. As such, it will take them longer to reach the point of familiarity where they're comfortable with sex.
And yes, I know I need to draw out my sex scenes. Several people have already bitched and moaned about that. It's just something I'm not terribly talented at. Like I said before, I'll do my best to work on it when it comes to Sparity.
I think Brae should be thanking that little calf for his um, "help" in moving the two along in their relationship.
Freaking swimming pool, you always end up with people having sex near you!
Great story! I only have one problem with it, to me Pinkie seems slightly OOC. Personally I see Pinkie as arrogant, only knowing things such a sex to the equivalent of an eight year old child. Then agian, it is Pinkie we're talking about here, so who knows?
Nine months later.