A heartbroken Spike goes through the magic mirror to find love and acceptance in the EG universe.
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Called it!
WOW!!! Applejack is in love with Sunset!?
AWESOME!!!
4018545 You were actually the one who gave me the idea. I was originally going to ship AJ with some random male OC from Manehatten that she had a crush on since she was a girl, but I think this worked out better.
4018667 Well to be honest the previous chapter set the tone for Sunset Shimmer and AJ to be a potential pairing.
Let's review:
Equestria Spike has met Human Rarity, and Rarity's being a good guest once she discovered his secret. Also remembering what happened during "Equestria Girls", she's not all pins and needles about it.
We have met Human Rainbow Dash, Human Pinkie, and now Human Applejack. And we are discovering that Applejack is trying her hardest to admit that she at least plays on both sides of the barn, and she keeps that under wraps because of her brother Human Macintosh. I'm kinda surprised that Applejack hasn't deduced that Spike is the same Spike from the high school dance incident in human form. (That's for a future chapter.) Speaking of crushes, Applejack realizes that she is crushing on Equestria Sunset, just that she is in human form. And it's a slowly developing crush since Sunset is essentially there because of community service. (We just can't throw Sunset in jail can we? Just locking them up kinda defeats the purpose of helping them, so I'm glad that she was sent to community service).
While we are on Sunset, we have her and Spike having a heart-to-heart, where they both admit to each other who they really are: a dragon and a unicorn respectively, both from Equestria and both here because things just never came out as their original forms. Sure the aspirations were different, but basically they are two peas of the same pod. And I can feel a sense of belonging between the two, not to mention at least understanding each other's plight. Definitely friends in the future, if they are not already.
So now we have it that Applejack likes Sunset, could definitely see Sunset start having feelings for Spike, and also could definitely having requited feelings between Spike and Rarity (right now, just friends, but there is a bit of attraction there, can't be wrong ). Oh yeah, Sunset doesn't even have a clue about Applejack's crush.
Not quite a love triangle, if that. But there is definitely some sort of love shape starting to manifest.
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So basicly its Love square
4018732 It was always my intention to make Sunset a relatable and redeemable character. Sure, she was a jerk in the movie but after the Rainbow Beam hit her, she seemed to regret her actions. I wanted to further emphasize that in the story.
As for the romantic triangle: I, myself, am NOT a big fan of them. In my opinion, they are a somewhat cheap tactic for adding fluffy drama chapters to a story, when all of the normal plot devices have dried up (ie. a tool of literary desperation on the author's part). I want the romance to feel good without any painful/senseless drama, even though some crave that sort of thing in a story.
New chapter brightened my weekend
and i thought this is going to end with AJ + Rarity haha
Have to point out a few plot issues, regrettably. Spike knows who Sunset is so he shouldn't be in any way shape or form surprised. On top of that Sunset Shimmer has been in the human world for at least 3 years before Twilight and Spike went there, since the mirror only opens every 30 moons, on top of the 30 moons between now and then. She certainly isn't new in town.
First Sparity, then MacinDash, now SunJack/AppleSet. Who's next? Pinkie with Fluttershy? Or Twilight(This world's Twilight) with Fluttershy or Pinkie?
You swedish by any chane?
4022383 No, I'm not. But in the story, Aloe and Lotus are. dl.dropbox.com/u/21167245/FiMFiction/Emoticons/misc_Lyra_happy.png
"jag vet rätt". That doesnt make sense in the swedish language, i presume you translated "i know, right" to swedish, "eller hur" would be a better use of wording in this case.
4022971 Yes that was my intention and I shall correct it. The phrase "Eller hur" does it have any umlauts over any of the vowels or is it written as you posted it?
4022995 it is written as i did it
First off, another great update to this wonderful tale of yours. It was nice to see Sunset again and befriending Spike like that.
I cannot wait to see how you would do Fluttershy or maybe Sweetie Belle into this story. So please do keep up the good work.
I'm enjoying this story, but there are a few things about it that don't quite...gel.
So it's been five years since Twilight became an alicorn...but only "a few months" have passed on the EG side of the mirror?
Even if you can explain that away with time dilation and Doctor Who type stuff...there's the other little thing:
You're writing this as if all the Equestria Girls characters are adults. But if it's just been "a few months", then, well...they're still in high school.
I mean, no matter how you look at it, the time frame doesn't remotely begin to match up.
4080588 I'll try and explain this as best I can.
1). I added an Alternate Universe tag for two reasons: a). The EG verse is literally an alternate universe. b). It gives me some creative leeway with the timelines. Such as the portal in Equestria does in fact only open every 2.5 years (30 moons roughly) but that doesn't apply on the EG-verse side. Meaning, only months might pass in the EG-verse, while years may pass in Equestria.
2). For the purpose of this story, I have made the human Mane 6 the age of 18. They have just recently graduated Highschool and are currently on summer break. So, in essence they are adults. When I said a few months passed, I mean about 8-9 months.
I'm sorry if I didn't make any of that clear. In all honesty I should've posted a blog or an AN explaining all of that. But...in the end this is why I don't like having an elaborate, structured timeline for any of my stories because it's a lot of extra effort on my part to keep everything in order.
Yes yes... I see...
4083114 You see...what exactly?
reading this chapter made me curious as to how the ponies are reacting to his leaving or if they didnt know he left disappearance
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Just sayin to take it easy, not trying to bash your fanfic. but hey we writers have our own way of making our fanfics the way we want them to be, so keep it up!
4158293 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png "Umm...excuse me sir, but what are you talking about? If...you don't mind me asking that is?"
4137885 Truer words have never been spoken. Brohoof my friend, and ill make a point to check out some of your stuff.
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Brohoof back to you as well my fellow brony!