A heartbroken Spike goes through the magic mirror to find love and acceptance in the EG universe.
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^ Triple G
Why is there so much space between the last sentence and the end of the frame? Was there supposed to be something there that didn't show up?
And lesson 1 for Spike: Seeing a girl naked w/o her permission is wrong. Same if she see you in just your "undergarments" w/o your permission in . The reason is that it's rude to just shout out your birthday suit in front of anyone, especially if one is showing it off to a member of the opposite sex. This is the same way why ponies in your world would still cover their genitals with their tails. It's a matter of privacy. Don't worry, new human, you will get it.
And I think that secretly Spike, Rarity was more flustered in seeing you in a less desired state than expected. She's really embarrassed at seeing you near-nude, and even more so when you saw her completely in the nude, even though it is her bedroom. Take that to heart.
I wonder when it will be that Spike will see the other dopplegangers in this tale. And I mean everyone, including Sunset Shimmer. I would love to see a bit of a catfight between Sunset and Rarity, doesn't matter if it's actual fingernalls/claws or verbal. But I assume that for a much later chapter.
Spike you clueless player.
3845315 The space wasn't intentional, probably something went wonky with google docs. I'll fix it.
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3845351 My balls hurt after watching that... dl.dropbox.com/u/21167245/FiMFiction/Emoticons/misc_Soarin_Dayum.png
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Then my job is done here!
*Brushes off hands*
Aww, I was kind of hoping Spike's reaction to Rarity saying a human girl doesn't like to be seen naked would be "Why? You looked really nice" or something similar.
For the love of Jesus Christ on a pogostick, the romantic tension is so thick I'd need a chainsaw to cut through it. Just fuck already!
(That was joke. The story is awesome, keep up the good work)
This had me laughing the whole time,Can't wait for Spike to start putting the charm on this Rar, my only fear is that she likes someone else But no matter where it heads I am very interested in your story and I will be waiting for your next update.
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Only a chainsaw? Surely you would need something a little more powerful to cut through that stuff...
Wow some the things rainbow says and pinkie man is crazy. I almost die when I read the end of the chapter. I'm loving this story
So there's a moment where Mr Cake sits between Rainbow Dash (Don't use RD) and Rarity and I'm positive you meant Pinkie since you than have Mr. Cake in the kitchen without actually moving.
Can't imagine Rarity wearing a shirt with a cat on it...
Aside from that that was pretty fucking hilarious.
Well Rarity did wanted to see Spike in his underwear.
Nice update and great intro to Pinkie.
3846725 Ok, I can see why you might be a bit confused. Mr. Cake isn't actually sitting with them. He's going back and forth between the Kitchen and the Front counter. I probably should have made that more obvious.
so they are even now ? Spike saw Rarity naked and she saw him naked ...
Yeah, very confusing.
3852087 Oops...ok I'll fix that. Man do I feel stupid now... fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/013/8/b/derpilee_by_comeha-d7213zo.png
A moment of silence for spike's balls for being squished as he sat down with nothing to protect them...
3862204 I make no promises concerning both of those subjects.
What would be really strange is if the ponies from Equestria all came to visit Spike that day...except for Pinkie. One of her is enough for one world.
are we gonna see equestria rarity and twilight get their just deserts?
I always wanted to read one of these stories where rarity sleeps with one of her friends when EVERYONE tells spike he has a good chance and then he finds this... and well everyone flips out on rarity and the other person for not only breaking spikes heart which isn't that bad but leading him on and not saying anything to him after everything he did for her. This one where its twilight and Rarity takes it even further with twilight hearing CONSTANTLY how much spike likes rarity then to do this to him.. well lets just say I would flip on him. Also if this was in a universe where Celestia was spikes mom well banishment sounds fun doesn't it?
3938303 I do plan on having regular Twilight show up in the EG universe to confront Spike, but it won't be for quite some time. As to how that happens...well if I told you that would be spoiling and that's no fun. fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/013/8/f/naughtilee_by_comeha-d7213zj.png
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Read Dark Seduction by Crisis Nova. In that one, Spike finds out in the worst possible way that Twilight and Rarity are at least dating (though it is implied that it is more than dating for the princess and the fashionista). And basically from that point forward, things generally go to shit for everypony involved.
It is rated mature, so proceed with caution. However, the author clearly emphasizes the ones where they are mature-rated and that they have a separate teen-rated chapter that runs parallel to the mature-rated storyline. So those that don't want to see sexual situations can stay with the non-clop chapters as they become available.
3963546 yeah I read it but I won't lie it seems more like they got off easy in my opinion. Hell the thing has a Tragedy Dark tag.
I just want 1 person to write a fic where rarity does that and then pretty much all of equestria wants blood. something to sate my rage at Rarity for taking spike for such a ride.
1. Will we see EQG Twilight that we never saw in the movie?
2. MOAR, NOW.
3969040 Answers to your questions
1). There is no EG Twilight in this story, only the Good Ole Equestrian Princess version. But don't worry she will be returning later in the story.
2). Moar you shall have. This week I'm currently set to work on Rarest, which means the next chapter will probably come out by Saturday. fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/014/8/d/pinkieplot_by_comeha-d7251pb.png
3970629 1. Thank you for answering my question, just wondering, seeing as it was implied that she lives over the in the city in the movie.
2. Yay! Your writing style keeps my interest and is never dull, props to you sir!
3971933 Considering that all of the other Mane 6 have doppelgängers in the EG-verse, many people assume that I would include one of Twilight as well but I'm not going to. It isn't particularly important to the plot that Spike finds another Twi (plus I'm lazy and don't feel like writing it). dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
Although if you are interested in an EG Twi, then there's a lovely story called The Long Road to Friendship that includes her but it mostly focuses on Sunset Shimmer.
Why thank you for the fic! I wasn't implying that "omg you have to include her cuz waiiifuuu", I was just curious if she'd make a cameo, like he'd visit a starbucks or something, see her being adorkable, and then step out because reasons. Great, now I'm babbling. Ignore me
You're gonna go far kid!
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Dark tag there is for mind control/manipulation things, which is what Chrysalis is famous for.
Tragedy tag showed up when Rarity attempted suicide (a slight spoiler, but considering the way the story is, it might be somewhat inevitable.)
And don't worry, it'll happen. The big thorn in the side for that idea is that regardless of how much a bitch/gold digger Rarity is, there are gonna be characters that sync with her. And canonically speaking, Rarity's gonna be friendly with all kinds regardless of her stature---not to mention that the vast majority of society believe that Spike's affections for Rarity are just a childhood crush and that it will eventually pass. What you have to do is make it so that Rarity is like the second coming of Saddam Hoofstein, and Spike the equivalent of President Obama just after his first presidental election.
3985643 yeah i can look at it that way. read it to but 4 or more years do not a childhood crush make. i could have understood if it was like even 8 or 9 months that statement. also i doubt i would have changed the very nature of my being (giving up greed) Given away something that I had been keeping for myself for a LONG time (Fire ruby)... might have dived in to save her but most likely would have just called the princess (Diamond dogs kidnapped her)
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Like I said---at first glance, it looks that the majority of ponies may truly think that all Spike's affections for Rarity is a crush. But we REALLY don't know!!!. Hell, as much as we want to think that the mane 6 are all well aware of Spike's crush, canonically, only Twilight and Pinkie do. It never shows that up for any of the others, even in Applejack's case. And if the other main characters appear to be clueless about Spike's crush, it could be a good theory that the vast majority just either don't know or really doesn't give a damn, worrying about their own livelihoods rather than romantic endeavors.
I may have misspoke in my previous comment. I was implying that everyone is blissly clueless and just don't care......until something comes to destroy the town.
3986258 eh cool. now then lets hope for the next update soon for this story. Its good.
3972596 The long road to friendship is a phenomenal tale.
Poor guy just can't catch a break, can he?