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Emerald Knight
Just your everyday teenager who likes metal music and ponies and works for a living and has high hopes for going no where in life
Emerald Knight
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4209321 Yay. Yeah its like he's level 80 on master difficulty some fights he will be op and others he will be under powered
Ummm... why 18 years old? Isn't that a bit too young? I must say that a Dragonborn/Dovahkiin at the age of 23/26 is okay. Your Dovahkiin is too OP in my opinion. It seems like he knows everything, ranging from magic to swordplay, enchanting to smithing. Selecting a class for your character helps you with his/her personality. The classes are: Warrior, Mage or Thief. Warrior is the most common.
And Talos seemed way too informal for me. He's one of the Divines, not an old friend. And I think that the Dragonborn could be a bit more religious towards Talos, like referring to him as 'Lord Talos', 'Mighty Talos', and many others.
I'm not saying that this isn't good. But you could use a proofreader and an editor.
4212602 Now see I could but I would know how people that old feel but I might change it, and after fighting a goddamn overpowered dragon on master difficulty you would not be formal to the guy who made it your destiny to kill the son of a bitch, and trust me when I say he gets kinda under powered later in the story, and no one on gods green earth is willing to help me on anything but I might change it here and their, but I think I will change it later on, but I play as a spell sword on it when I play a Breton in skyrim, I almost no life it last year, then it deleted the goddamn data. But thanks for the feed back I really need more of it from people
Emerald Knight
Bloody brilliant mate keep up the great work
DOVAHKIIN DOVAHKIIN NAAL OK ZIN LOS VAHRIIN
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