Happiness limited in weeks

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Pinkie pie took a trip to the doctor to see if she had good health however when the worst happens to her she now she tries to tells rainbow dash how she feels about her

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rasta-gringo

rasta-gringo #1 · Mar 20th, 2012 · · ·

Are you prepared for almost violent criticism?

Spelling was good. Grammar was ok.

UnlocalEntity

UnlocalEntity #2 · Mar 23rd, 2012 · · ·

I say. This made me tear... This had some rather romantic parts in it, aswell. Besides Grammar, you sir have no doubtedly (that's not even a word, lol) made a sad yet embracing fic.
~Love you
-Pancakes

The mike

The mike #3 · Mar 23rd, 2012 · 1 · ·

Usually I avoid [SAD] tags, what leaves me wondering, why the hay did I read this?, Now I feel terrible...

SwiperTheFox

SwiperTheFox #4 · Apr 8th, 2012 · · ·

Hmmm... a lot of downvotes. However, the concept looks great.

Let's open up the story, shall we?

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*Looks at story*

On a sunny afternoon in pony vile all the ponies seemed to be enjoying the beautiful and warm weather celestia has offered them. And on this peaceful day pinkie pie was in the hospital checking up on her health.

“So doctor, how am I. I think I might be coming down with a cold I keep having this cough and also these big head aches daily I think I might need some medicine.” Said Pinkie Pie while she was playing with the end of her uncontrollable tangled mane with her hooves, the doctor looked down on his clip bored while continuously stroking his chin. Suddenly, he gasped causing him to drop his clip bored. The doctor immediately began sweating looking at pinkie pie with sympathy.

=>Not saying Ponyville

=>Not saying Celestia

=> Not saying Pinkie Pie

=> Beginning with a literal 'weather report'

=> Not saying "How am I?"

...

Oh, my goodness.

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*Downvotes with extreme intensity*

Iczer-four