Princess Celestia finds herself in a strange new world, with a strange new body. With no knowledge of this land, and no way to return home, she finds herself relying on a kind-hearted man to show her what it means to be a human.
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this seems like it may go dark. havent seen much comedy lately.
Your description has caught my attention. I shall give the first three chapters a read before I shall make a decision.
There is a lot of flip-flopping with trust in this chapter...
Another good chapter.^^
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Couldn't care less makes perfect sense. It means that it's not possible to care any less. Could care less means that they already care a little.
Either way it's a stupid phrase.
You keep saying it's not good, but this story just feels right. This is my favorite story on this website, next to the Ballad of Twilight Sparkle.
Close... So very, very, close, but so very, very, far...
This is a difficult situation at hand I don't know if he will make it through this
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The biggest downside of this story is the lack of details. It makes it seem like I'm not putting any effort into working on the chapters. That, and the last five chapters have been almost the same exact thing, which is something I have to fix.
I like the story itself, and I like working on it, but it's just been dragging out so much recently.
Man, Phil just seems to be either an idiot, letting the world pass him by, or both at times.
6385058 Hey, it's lack of detail vs. purple prose.
I just started this story a few days ago and I must say I am surprised I really did not think this was going to be this good it has a way different style and a good story line I will be watching for more chapters.
Harts Fire
Okay, I've read everything until the point where Phil still acts like Mother Teresa with trust. I feel like unless you personally have had your trust broken by someone important to you, or at least have it broken multiple times, TRUST is a word used very lightly now a days. I don't know, I feel like with my own experiences I would have at least been pissed about being drugged. It's not like she just said an innocent lie or stole a cookie from the cookie jar. No, she DRUGGED Phil, that's not something one would get away with a slap on the wrist. Phil feels to, robotic, scripted, and down right lacking in any emotions that make humans, human. I'm having a hard time relating to Phil, and trying to see things from his point of view because its all just so passive, that it actually hurts to try and understand what his thought process is. I'm not saying being friendly and good is a bad thing I'm just saying there seems to be no good or bad Passion in him. But it ain't my story, so this is where I sign off, it's a fun and likable story idea but I just cant keep going. I wish you the best of success with your story my friend!
7231352 My thoughts exactly.
This was enjoyable for awhile, but now its just meh. Later author and good look with future endeavors!
7231352 I get where you're coming from, but people do sometimes act like Phil. I know I do, at least a little bit. Not everyone understands it, but everyone has a breaking point. Once you've hit that breaking point, that point of no return, you're different, and people will notice how much you've changed. Nobody in my family knew when I hit my breaking point (after three of my friends committed suicide) but that's because I was a weird fourteen-year-old that already had inconsistent behavioral patterns. Because of that, and a promise I made to one of them, I just don't have it in me to get really mad or angry. I have no room in my heart for malice or petty grudges. That's not to say I don't dislike and distrust the assholes that need to go skydiving without a parachute, but I don't hate them. We know little-to-nothing about Phil's past, so he very well could have gone through some kind of catalyst that changed him enough that he didn't have it in him to hate people, or something similar.
i cant tell if this portrayal of celestia is an accurate depiction of women, or a plot thing for this story, but if women get angry over this kinda shit i dont want anything to do with them
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Buddy I barely even know what a woman is let alone how they'd react.